monodemo
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I have 450 stories published in
21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 473716 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 358 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
White Coats
I entered the asylum at quarter past four, The face of depression had wrapped on my door. Met with a face who repeated a name, Over and over waving...
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- 1363 reads
First summer rain
I close my eyes as the first summer rain Gently clashes and cascades down the window pane. I look down and see a small pair of army green Wellington...
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- 1191 reads
The Ocean
I can taste the salt coming from the spray of the high tides Ocean as its waves break against the rocks. As I watch the children play, unbeknownst to...
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Aurora
I stood on a mound of dew kissed blades of grass Overlooking the lake. The reflection of the lights dancing On the waters ripples were like that of...
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Speechless
You stand there with your blackened teeth, And pose with your knife so sharp, You make my choices obsolete, On and on you harp, About killing me, my...
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- 597 reads