monodemo
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I have 450 stories published in
21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 480367 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 358 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Do not pass go
Her perfectly manicured, blood-soaked hand, discovered in the prickly blackberry bushes beside the moss-covered train tracks by two mischievous...
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- 676 reads
The dinner guest
Personality acrimonious, Attitude brusque, He arrives dishevelled, Why the hell us? His birthday forthwith, The arsenic is out, This former soldier,...
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- 499 reads
The letter
Hiya lovey, I hope you are keeping well. You were sorely missed at Paddy’s funeral yesterday. I know you couldn’t make it because of covid, but I...
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- 547 reads
The one that got away
When I was fifteen, instead of drinking cheap alcohol behind the community centre, or smoking weed in the shed next to the school, I was at home, in...
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Don't judge a book by its cover!
She sits down, Everyone stares, Her big, red nose, Her chin with the hairs. She talks on the phone, Her voice like a banshee, Loud and opinionated,...
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- 1009 reads