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I have 2108 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5107547 times and 657 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Daffodil

[this poem is based on/inspired by/semi-translation of a Welsh poem by I D Hooson (1880-1948)] I saw you in the wild, dancing … I saw you in a vase, still …
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Waiting now, but still glad to comfort

“Come, sit on my lap’,” said the old lady, her legs now fragile and thin, her mind back in youth and the enjoyment to a tired child she could bring...
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The Great Exchange!

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The One who had no sin at all took on our sin to save us, and so he bore its judgement full – his...
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Cherry

Hear, think, speak!

His mind directs his vocal chords, vibrations emanate. They reach an ear, and so his words its tunnel permeate The ear-drum trembles – tiny bones the...

The ‘Healing’ all need

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] It’s not just that we do what’s wrong, but that we tend to do what’s wrong, without a deep desire sure for...

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1538 of my comments have received 1586 Great Feedback votes

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So he has to 'believe' in

Posted on Tue, 24 Dec 2024

So he has to 'believe' in something, some feeling of joy and warmth towards fellow-creatures, with a vague hope of memory!

How many realise that Christmas actually tells of concrete physical evidence to believe in. Not a philosophical...

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Posted in Santa Pause

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Glad you are so much better,

Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2024

Glad you are so much better, Jenny. Pain and illness ceratinly make us appreciate freedom from it the more. Many troubles in this life, but much wonder and joy too, and good when we have human support and companionship and help, and medical, and...

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Posted in Bright Side Of Life

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Intriguing, and skilful

Posted on Sat, 21 Dec 2024

Intriguing, and skilful creating of the conversation at such a time.

The purpose of life can only come from the Creator revealing his plan for all and for us, and his salvation, and his open arms. But so much of the time such, and He...

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Posted in My apologies to great questions for small answers

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If it's self-centred, not God

Posted on Wed, 18 Dec 2024

If it's self-centred, not God-centred, and others-centred, then enjoyment and celebration are lost. Rhiannon

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Posted in What Has Christmas Become

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What a beautiful bird! And

Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2024

What a beautiful bird! And what patience and quietness to capture such film. A privilege for us to be able to watch from our homes. Thank you for drawing attention to it. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Bower Flame Bird

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You evoke the relaxed pace of

Posted on Tue, 10 Dec 2024

You evoke the relaxed pace of walking out quietly in a quiet place, simply observing all that is around and thus relaxing away from tumultuous thoughts and noise. Rhiannon

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Posted in A figure in the vast landscape

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Storms can make you feel cosy

Posted on Sat, 07 Dec 2024

Storms can make you feel cosy and romantic indoors, as can candles, but this one seems a bit  more violent and disturbing of the peace — here, anyway! Two weeks ago it was the amount of rain falling and coming down the rivers causing floods, but...

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Posted in Stormy Night Of Passion

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I hadn't known Betjeman's

Posted on Wed, 04 Dec 2024

I hadn't known Betjeman's poem. You have caught much of the way his thoughts were around the season and like him appreciating the best of the family celebrations. He seems to end a little uncertain of the incarnation but realising that if true it...

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Posted in Christmas Skies

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Glad you put in that PS,

Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024

Glad you put in that PS, Jenny. I realised yesterday I hadn't asked you how things were progressing. Lovely to hear your relief and enjoyment. Rh

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Posted in John's Conscience

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Nice twist at the end.

Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024

Nice twist at the end. Encouraged thought over the whole needs, not just a rush in greed, haste and unnecessary carelessness, but willingness that some development may be needed! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Road To Ponkerton Village - Part 2

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