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I have 1835 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2535990 times and 535 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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A king’s labour

My primary allegiance is to the King of kings, but I will honour Charles as king and all those ‘in the wings’ willing to serve … And pray for … Our parliament is … can be foolish …Be glad we’ve no dictator…encourage good debate …not anarchic ferment …
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Above Upper Hill

(20/4/23) Just a little time to go out, and a beautiful day before the rain returns tomorrow. Quick look at map, and find a suggestion – up the hill...
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Removing the Sting!

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] What is the sting of death? Not just the pain, last breath, not just the disappointment, end of time upon...
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That long nose!

Starfish Girl suggested that as I had written on Nose, and she on Trunk, I should try one on the famous nose. This is a revision of an old one …
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2 Super-sensory-sensitive scrubbing towers

One nose two tunnels through which the air flows as it goes …You value your mouth, ears, eyes, but do you despise your humble nose?
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1318 of my comments have received 1356 Great Feedback votes

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I gather your aim is

Posted on Mon, 03 Apr 2023

I gather your aim is conveying that it isn't physical longevity on earth that should be the main aim and desire, but use, enjoyment, and memories of how the time used and experienced.

That is good, I like that impression conveyed. Of...

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Posted in A Requiem for One Man’s Life (Edited and Updated 2023)

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You encourage the noticing of

Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023

You encourage the noticing of the little things to see and hear and smell, even when we can't go far! Rhiannon

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Posted in Relaxed Day In Summer

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Really enjoyed the cliff

Posted on Tue, 28 Mar 2023

Really enjoyed the cliff ramble as have had so many holidays on Purbeck cliffs and Pembrokeshire coastal path, and also lived many years in Barry with the friendly Flat Holm and Steep Holm to see (except when it was raining, though the saying was...

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Posted in Brean Down

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The awakening nature with the

Posted on Tue, 21 Mar 2023

The awakening nature with the drifting in of spring likened to what is much conceled at night until daybreak? Rhiannon

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Posted in Awakening Of Spring

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Dougie, you've missed an 'r'

Posted on Mon, 20 Mar 2023

Dougie, you've missed an 'r' out of the title.

I like the haiku – the lightest touch, as the woman who touched Christ's garment, but he knew she had done so, and that she believed, and was approaching him. Rhiannon

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Posted in Prayer

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Good. The shock from short

Posted on Fri, 17 Mar 2023

Good. The shock from short says more than wordy! A lovely shock those daffodils to all who are tired after winter — trumpeting! Rhiannon

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Posted in Haiku - Daffodils.

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It's very sweet and poignant.

Posted on Sun, 12 Mar 2023

It's very sweet and poignant. A time when pride can get broken and a relief to just accept and appreciate and connect. Well shown! Rhianon

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Posted in the ward

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Sounds a lovely place and

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

Sounds a lovely place and weather to enjoy the daffodils and other signs. Rhiannon

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Posted in Spring Skies (After the Dogs of Winter)

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 A good little tale. Nicely

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

 A good little tale. Nicely told for children. And another intriguing collective noun! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Garden of Songbird Charm Part Two

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Such a lovely garden to

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

Such a lovely garden to visualise! and the idea of them learning to enjoy gardening and able to notice so much wildlife. Thank you for reminding me of the two delightful collective nouns! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Garden of Songbird Charm

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