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I have 2177 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5742931 times and 686 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1553 of my 13,455 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1602 votes

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Waiting now, but still glad to comfort

“Come, sit on my lap’,” said the old lady, her legs now fragile and thin, her mind back in youth and the enjoyment to a tired child she could bring...
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The Great Exchange!

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The One who had no sin at all took on our sin to save us, and so he bore its judgement full – his...
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Cherry

Hear, think, speak!

His mind directs his vocal chords, vibrations emanate. They reach an ear, and so his words its tunnel permeate The ear-drum trembles – tiny bones the...

The ‘Healing’ all need

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] It’s not just that we do what’s wrong, but that we tend to do what’s wrong, without a deep desire sure for...
Cherry

Whatever the weather …

Whether the weather suit you, or whether the weather suit me, whatever the weather we’ll weather the weather together … some blether and blather,...
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1553 of my comments have received 1602 Great Feedback votes

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Seems quite a 'rough jewel',

Posted on Fri, 01 Mar 2024

Seems quite a 'rough jewel', wants to help the lady, but is frustrated with himself how his hang-ups and irritations roughen his tongue and shorten his patience, sharpen his manner. Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (14)

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I'm sorry I missed this Jenny

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2024

I'm sorry I missed this Jenny. And have missed you writing recently. I hadn't  heard of this lady. Quite some walk! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Fish Hawker

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Just a few lines expressive

Posted on Wed, 28 Feb 2024

Just a few lines expressive of the trouble of war. There is so much war around the world, and much we rarely hear about.

When we were growing up our father couldn't really talk about the war (WW2) with us, though he got frustrated at some...

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Posted in Conscript

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He does seem to have a lot of

Posted on Tue, 27 Feb 2024

He does seem to have a lot of hang-ups. I suppose that is all part of the back-story. Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (13)

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I don't think I understand

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2024

I don't think I understand the 'warm gun' phrase though maybe it is conjuring up how we can selfishly grab what will (we think) bring us happiness, without care for harm that the action may bring to others.

I like your concentration on the...

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Posted in Catch-me-if-you-can

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Your picture (attractively

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2024

Your picture (attractively written) is of matter coming from nowhere and suddenly light, and suddenly the matter arranging itself. That does seem rather remarkable to assemble into complexity unless guided, and that by an extreme intelligence and...

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Posted in That first light

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I liked the way you described

Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2024

I liked the way you described open and friendly smiles that open up a link. But your later comments show how despite the genuine friendliness, alcohol prevents a real openness, and dims the sense of need or work for others' needs. So much going...

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Posted in Johnny Ten Levs

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Thank you. It was just that

Posted on Thu, 22 Feb 2024

Thank you. It was just that last part we had to scramble up as there is a carpark below (full of puddles and potholes!). The 'giant golf ball' can be seen from afar (as a tiny golf ball catching the sun!) looking like an observatory but I think...

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Posted in Titterstone Clee (533m)16/02/24

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thank youk, Dougie. I have

Posted on Tue, 20 Feb 2024

thank youk, Dougie. I have just been reading your latest post.!

I think in Britain there are still so few that realise that the so-called evidence for life evolving (as opposed to small changes in variation within species) is crumbling and...

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Posted in Precision-Controlled Complex Chemistry

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I found your poem and that of

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2024

I found your poem and that of Kipling (which I hadn't read before) interesting and descriptive of the pull of the open space (I imagine a similar pull felt often by many to be up in mountainous widlerness) and the conflict of danger and...

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Posted in The Long Call

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