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I have 2060 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4496393 times and 639 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Light in Darkness

Plot’s failure many celebrate by fine displays of colourful light brightening up the sky at night – a sparkling starry vivid sight … soon Christmas comes – the silent night a few poor shepherd’s sudden sight and hearing of …
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Faith in Who? Why?

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Faith in a Father whose Son walked this earth, and showed us His kindness, displayed His true worth. Faith...
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To kill a fly …

That irritating buzz from somewhere nearby when nearly time for sleep – sounds like a mozzie/fly. He skulked around with swatter-bat but nothing...

While there is time …

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] So now we have this time to learn the truth of all …

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1504 of my comments have received 1547 Great Feedback votes

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A full American breakfast!

Posted on Sun, 28 Jan 2024

A full American breakfast! Though I think my family have it as a treat often on Saturdays! I can't see them 'roughing it' and fishing for their food yet, but it sounds as if you've got interesting clues fixed up. You spoke about Dad's boots. Have...

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 3

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I'm sorry, i missed noticing

Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024

I'm sorry, i missed noticing this last week. You are keeping up the intriguing mix of the ordinary and quirky fantasy (smelly sneakers and Dad's long-ago fantasy adventure) I was amused by the comment of the 'dog' having 'to accommodate her...

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 2

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it will take some unravelling

Posted on Mon, 29 Jan 2024

it will take some unravelling. Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (6)

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Of course it's sometimes easy

Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024

Of course it's sometimes easy to just say, 'Oh, I don't remember', and carry on before it gets anyone worried! Once in a film, someone gave the name of something in Welsh, and what it actually meant was 'whatdyoucallit'!  When I was growing up,...

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Posted in Forgetting something? Just say London Bridge.

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Much there of the time of

Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024

Much there of the time of year, especially on brighter days. We've just been out in the countryside with the late afternoon shadows and glinting sunshine (which may form into a poem soon!)

The stars of the clear night well protrayed too....

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Posted in After the Snow

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I think your writing was more

Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2024

I think your writing was more visual than the photo, with the moon through and on the trees, and the wind howling through!

Particularly liked the last 3 lines (though, now unseen, its 'caressing' work will continue!) Wasn't sure of the...

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Posted in Silent Mystic

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thanks.Yes! it's no wonder

Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2024

thanks.Yes! it's no wonder Rev Awdry and others have put faces on them is it? My father's first car was called Canta because, he said, 'Canta Ford it'!  There is a Welsh rhyme for children about 'Morus y gwynt' (Morris the wind) so my friend's...

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Posted in What happened, little car?

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Amusing mix of the fantastic

Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024

Amusing mix of the fantastic with the very ordinary smelly sneakers! Rhiannon

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 1

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Nice twist! Sympathy and

Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024

Nice twist! Sympathy and being able to give and take help and accept vulnarablitiy and imperfections makes for good relationships and happy. Rhiannon

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Posted in Wasn't that a party

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A so sad story, but showing

Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024

A so sad story, but showing much understanding of the emotions of both. There seems a determination to get through it in respect to their relation. I suppose that is the hope in the last sentences. I expect that her hope in the cat comes from her...

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Posted in Enoshima (Part Two of Two)

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