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I have 1839 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2555989 times and 536 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1321 of my 12,068 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1359 votes

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Nana and Grampa (c 1950-1960)

Nana: Round and jolly … Grampa: Slow and gentle (slow wink) hen-pecked?…
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‘As useful as a chocolate teapot!'

I’m a chocolate teapot looking swell; but for tea I’m useless – heat will tell! Collapsing in hot water – I will keep cool and idle, or I’m soon a...

Pilate’s Quandary

Pilate was frightened to do what he knew, knew was the just and the right thing to do. Pity that Pilate did not find out who … The priests and the people did not give much thought to what Jesus did, and the words that he taught …
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Word-music

Patterns of sounds music of words pleasing the chime of rhythm and rhyme. Concisely composed a message that’s structured, subtle its echoes carefully...

Why the bread, why the wine?

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] So, why do you eat a morsel of bread? and why do you drink the portion of wine? This rite shows that Jesus...

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1321 of my comments have received 1359 Great Feedback votes

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Glad to have the update, Jean

Posted on Wed, 14 Jun 2023

Glad to have the update, Jean. Had been wondering whether to email.

Good you had that timely time with  your daughter and grandson.

You must treasure the times when you feel comfortable and clear-headed. Praying persevering comfort...

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Posted in Cancer Log 3

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Thoughtful piece. So often we

Posted on Sun, 11 Jun 2023

Thoughtful piece. So often we see, we can't for sure understand fully, maybe we will be able to be kind, maybe no contact. All we can do otherwise is pray about what seems to be the needs, to One who actually fully understands us both. Rhiannon

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Posted in For now, she just walks!

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What a horrible man, one day

Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2011

What a horrible man, one day he will be sorry for beig so harsh. Keeping his men well-fed, well-rested, and being friendly would get better work. And now this awful threat. Sounds like tales of wartime.

will have to live with his...

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Posted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY TWO )

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A cool, beautiful place.

Posted on Tue, 13 Jun 2023

A cool, beautiful place.

And again stirring up interest in looking around by your lines, 'nourishing secrets that only the inhabitants of wildlife know. Rhiannon

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Posted in Splendour Of The Woods

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Again the psychology or the

Posted on Mon, 12 Jun 2023

Again the psychology or the travel for the participants thoughtfully handled, and make an interesting read of the possibillities.

I don't see why you consider the search for life a noble pursuit? Is that why you think there should be trips...

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Posted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Three of Three)

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A sensitive exploration of

Posted on Sun, 11 Jun 2023

A sensitive exploration of what the travel would be like for iindividuals. It's a bit of a tongue-in-cheek comment about Dragonfly at the end isn't it! Ithink it is due to arrive in 2034 if it gets off in 2026? I suppose if it is  assumed by many...

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Posted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Two of Three)

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Just to let you know I am

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2011

Just to let you know I am reading on, in fits and starts. It works well to have these short sections. Much easier to read, and I think I find it easier to read on a few at a time, than I would to read a long section. You hold the reader and...

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Posted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY )

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It will be interesting to see

Posted on Fri, 09 Jun 2023

It will be interesting to see how you propose to develop this story. Must take a lot of work honing the threads carefully. I thought I had started reading something by you yesterday about a fishmarket, when I was called away? Rhiannon

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Posted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part One of Three)

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You encourage to look on the

Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2023

You encourage to look on the greenery and the activity and variety, to distract and calm the thoughts restfully, Jenny. Rhiannon

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Posted in Silver Jubilee Lake

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A soothing pillow of

Posted on Sun, 04 Jun 2023

A soothing pillow of imaginative escape! With a soothing and pleasing rythm, rhyme, and images. Rhiannon

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Posted in "A Little Rhyme"

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