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I have 2164 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5628829 times and 681 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Transforming Sodium (Na)

Sodium metal unstable, inflammable … chlorine, poisonous gas … common table salt! … caustic soda … baking soda …
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Cherry

Kingpin Carbon – Why?

As if each atom has four 'arms' that reach … and so, beautiful, glittering, hard, hard diamond, or messy, useful, charcoal, and the linker for the complex chemisty of life …

From the Chinese Bathyscaphe, Striver

Deep, deep down in the Mariana Trench 11,000 metres down, dark and cold, the pressure is immense (like 100 adult elephants standing on your head)...
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Evil plans frustrated

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] (based on David’s testimony when fleeing from Absiolom’s rebellion as in Psalm 3) They say God is not helping me – I trust. They think that they have vanquished me – and thrust their sneers, and act rebelliously – God must …

106!!

Physically frail and fading, failing; still strong in spirit, character, more content nowadays, Not sleeping today! Caring Home beautiful cake preparing – with firework! …
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1551 of my comments have received 1600 Great Feedback votes

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It is a real problem! My

Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2024

It is a real problem! My frustration is that parents are so often talking to their young children while looking at their phone. Children need eye-contact and the feeling of undivided attention and interest. Rhiannon

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Posted in A Martian Sends a Postcard Home 2024

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I seem to have missed this

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024

I seem to have missed this before. You always write smoothly. I still think that the intrigue of claimed mysterious sightings, whether trickery, imagination or real are a distraction from investigating the mysteries of life whose sollutions have...

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Posted in Tom Crean

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What a lovely description of

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2024

What a lovely description of your place of relaxation! Rhiannon

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Posted in Musings Among Flowering Bushes

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Thanks. Maybe they had it

Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2024

Thanks. Maybe they had it coming, but we mustn't shut them off from the possiblitiy of repentance and reformation. Being found out is sometimes a blessing, as our children come to realise!

The reference to the parable of the Pharisee and...

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Posted in Not just the specks in their eyes*

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Thanks. No, I didn't put/have

Posted on Mon, 05 Aug 2024

Thanks. No, I didn't put/have a rhyme for dialogue. Treated it as a longer line! I don't put in rhymes for the sake of it, but if they fit and enhance the meaning and are failrly unobtrusive they do aid the flow and impact and readability!...

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Posted in In the summer heat

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the skilled artistry of

Posted on Sun, 04 Aug 2024

the skilled artistry of writers with their nimble fingers,

That phrase amused and intrigued me a little: I thought, isn't it the nimble mind that is sorting out what to write, but then I realised the thoughts must be caught by the...

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Posted in Bee Muse

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Thank you, Jenny.

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2024

Thank you, Jenny.

There is so much wielding of knives, sometimes meant for 'enemies' though even then sometimes others getting hurt or killed.

There is a generation that has been robbed of training and foundations by example and...

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Posted in Hold fast To Love

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Lovely to have noticing eyes

Posted on Wed, 24 Jul 2024

Lovely to have noticing eyes and mind to see beauty and the interest of variations in everything around all the time. Do you use your observations in artwork as well as writing and enjoyment of thought? Rhiannon

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Posted in Here I Am. By MarciaMarcia

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I'm sorry to hear you are

Posted on Wed, 24 Jul 2024

I'm sorry to hear you are experiecing such pain and illness, Jenny. That video is a lovely collection of images. Visiting such places that I have never been to and never will! It is good that we have such available now, and of course memories to...

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Posted in Suspended Between Two Worlds

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Incidentally imparting

Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024

Incidentally imparting information about Iceland during WW2! Presumably Eric wasn't badly hurt?

How lovely to have been able to stroll around a crater in the Aeolian islands. Rhiannon

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Posted in Eric’s War

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