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I have 2060 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4496176 times and 639 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1504 of my 13,166 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1547 votes

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Whose shoes?

…When she got off the bouncy castle … where were her new boots? …
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The Better Bargain!

Full river – soothing progress steady slow gentle ripples in the flow clear waters: still and quiet all around — not like the ‘Saturday Black Friday...
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Suffocating Falseness

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Like a fish out of water that’s gasping for breath so many thirst, hunger – they’re desperate for truth. Yet...
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More — or less?

Oliver Twist came some kids to meet, to ask if they’d had enough to eat …
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Pasture-Cleaners

Beetles that roll up balls of their favourite food source … cattle imported but their poo wasn’t suited to the native dung beetles …

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1504 of my comments have received 1547 Great Feedback votes

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I don't think I understand

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2024

I don't think I understand the 'warm gun' phrase though maybe it is conjuring up how we can selfishly grab what will (we think) bring us happiness, without care for harm that the action may bring to others.

I like your concentration on the...

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Posted in Catch-me-if-you-can

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Your picture (attractively

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2024

Your picture (attractively written) is of matter coming from nowhere and suddenly light, and suddenly the matter arranging itself. That does seem rather remarkable to assemble into complexity unless guided, and that by an extreme intelligence and...

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Posted in That first light

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I liked the way you described

Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2024

I liked the way you described open and friendly smiles that open up a link. But your later comments show how despite the genuine friendliness, alcohol prevents a real openness, and dims the sense of need or work for others' needs. So much going...

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Posted in Johnny Ten Levs

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Thank you. It was just that

Posted on Thu, 22 Feb 2024

Thank you. It was just that last part we had to scramble up as there is a carpark below (full of puddles and potholes!). The 'giant golf ball' can be seen from afar (as a tiny golf ball catching the sun!) looking like an observatory but I think...

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Posted in Titterstone Clee (533m)16/02/24

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thank youk, Dougie. I have

Posted on Tue, 20 Feb 2024

thank youk, Dougie. I have just been reading your latest post.!

I think in Britain there are still so few that realise that the so-called evidence for life evolving (as opposed to small changes in variation within species) is crumbling and...

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Posted in Precision-Controlled Complex Chemistry

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I found your poem and that of

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2024

I found your poem and that of Kipling (which I hadn't read before) interesting and descriptive of the pull of the open space (I imagine a similar pull felt often by many to be up in mountainous widlerness) and the conflict of danger and...

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Posted in The Long Call

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What a wonderful walk! And

Posted on Fri, 16 Feb 2024

What a wonderful walk! And that because you have eyes to see, and in such description! (I had not heard the word 'claggy' before. Looked it up as I thought you had invented it, like my sinky!). You bring to life the feeling of fresh breezy air...

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Posted in Two kinds of crying : 15th February 2024

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Bent on putting people off

Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2024

Bent on putting people off their food? People seem very varied in their sensitivity to scents and smells. When we used to pcinic when out walking my husband used to want me to sit down-wind when eating my much beloved banana as he said it...

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Posted in Cheese and Onion Tuesday

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Some thoughtful comments and

Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2024

Some thoughtful comments and gatherings of info. The history of the region is so complex. I have heard that actually Ukraine is older than Russia. But boundaries and people movement within continents have been so fluid at times probably. How much...

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Posted in After Russian Rain (A Postscript from Moscow)

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Evocative. Reminds of

Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2024

Evocative. Reminds of 'Sometimes I sits and thinks, and sometimes I just sits' which my mother was fond of quoting. Those without baths must find another haven for just stopping off gird if only for a few moments, like sleep. Clear the mind,...

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Posted in In the Bath

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