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I have 2059 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4494952 times and 639 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1504 of my 13,165 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1547 votes

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Cherry

Let it snow …

with apologies to A A Milne* Jane has a great big padded coat on Jane has a scarf and furry hat Jane has warm mitts, thick socks and boots on, and...

The Young Child, the Wise Men and Herod

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Travelling many months to behold the King now born, as long foretold. The star announced and led the way –...
Cherry

January 1

Whoosh! Whoosh! Blown through the New Year Gate – not too soon not too late. Bang! Bang! celebrate new fresh date? The days get longer, we get older...
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Kind, wise lives

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] When welcoming guests, don’t fuss and stress they’d rather less poshness than tense distress … Words spoken with haste… Lying with skill …

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1504 of my comments have received 1547 Great Feedback votes

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I wouldn't know about all the

Posted on Fri, 26 Apr 2024

I wouldn't know about all the procedures, but it sounded realistic enough. I was amused by 'Kidney bowl made from the same stuff as egg-boxes containing …'

He seems so torn between wanting to be on the side of law and order now,...

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Posted in New Directions (18)

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You enjoy writing poetry raps

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

You enjoy writing poetry raps as much as you enjoy your yoghurt, Bulgarian! Sounds strong! Rhiannon

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Posted in Lactobacillus Bulgaricus or Bust!

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You paint an attractive and

Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2024

You paint an attractive and interesting picture with your words. Personally I'm not enamoured by the vast swathes of rape, which seem to change the traaditionaly scenery into something more continental, but i can see the brightness is enjoyable...

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Posted in Yellow Blooms Of Late May

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Best that it's going to be

Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024

Best that it's going to be all our in the open. I hope she's going to be OK, with delayed shock as well as the hammering. Have they taken anything? Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (16)

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This is a bit of fun, taking

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2024

This is a bit of fun, taking on a mouse-view in your wander! Though I do wonder whether mice do like to get wet or whether they shelter. Cats don't like rain do they? regards, Rhiannon

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Posted in Wild Side Of April

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A metaphor for the Light and

Posted on Wed, 10 Apr 2024

A metaphor for the Light and hope that we may only notice and grasp when it is, partly and temporarily, taken away.

I was hopeing those glasses were genuine strong enough ones. They should be at that price I shouod think! Rhiannon

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Posted in Eclipse

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Thank you for drawing

Posted on Sun, 07 Apr 2024

Thank you for drawing attention to those two songs. I hadn't heard of them, and googled the lyrics to read. So good to know they are out there to be heard and read often! Rhiannon

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Posted in Holy Forever.

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An interesting idea that she

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024

An interesting idea that she is kept away from possible danger and uprising, but doesns't understand and feels bitterness that  'life' is passing her by? Rhiannon

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Posted in In A Troubled Land

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Lovely twist and very

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024

Lovely twist and very believable! Rhiannon

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Posted in Dad's poet society

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A vivid insight into your

Posted on Tue, 02 Apr 2024

A vivid insight into your enjoyment of the new 'home'. The final line was very striking! Rhiannon

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Posted in A Place in the Sun

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