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I have 2114 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5176972 times and 658 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1545 of my 13,414 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1593 votes

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Tasty Harvest

Bush bursting with gooseberries … anticipation: but last year …
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Forgive – and forget?

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] We cannot ask God to forgive, count us good, if we will not pardon those whom we should. When choosing to...

Impulsive Anger and Escalation

How easily I get irritated and snap instead of chat. How easily nations squabble and angry thrust becomes a tit-for-tat. “Blessed are the peacemakers...
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Swallow pride, ask Dad, listen…

I was a teenager, age about 15. I’d learnt to float happily when we regularly visited the beautiful quiet cove at Cwm-yr-eglwys in north Pembrokeshire. But I couldn’t swim. My father tried to teach me, but I think I was too stubborn to listen properly … But now I wanted to go to a youth camp back in Wales with a friend, on Bala lake …
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The Bible Book of Proverbs

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A book of a father’s instructions, desiring his child’s good health … So much common-sense, and word-pictures – memorable to stick in the mind …

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1545 of my comments have received 1593 Great Feedback votes

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You subtly show the

Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024

You subtly show the inadequacy of really trying to 'receate' a person in film-image and real-time AI-generated dialogue, and his confused unease, leaving the reader to contemplate how unreal any further contact with such a 'hologram' would be....

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Posted in Ghostbot (Part Two of Two)

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So sorry you are going

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024

So sorry you are going through such a time, Jenny. A bit like a tunnel in itself. I know what being confined is like, and some difficult pain-pressures, but not like you are enduring at present. I suppose pain relief maybe brings a little easing...

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Posted in Can Life Get Better?

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He's reluctant to open the

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024

He's reluctant to open the message, but then to open the link. That latter is what is dangerous, isn't it (as I've often been told!). So there's no danger to opening the message? Did he? And then hover over whether to click on the link, because...

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Posted in Ghostbot (Part One of Two)

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Sensitive telling Seems to

Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2024

Sensitive telling Seems to have an echo of the parable of the Lost Sheep. Rhiannon

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Posted in A Year with the Brighouse Stars Walking Club (December)

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One of our grandsons has just

Posted on Mon, 02 Sep 2024

One of our grandsons has just started a year in Budapest postgrad and has been astonished at the heat, but his eczema is much better in it. Rhiannon

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Posted in For the Love of Irma Ogden

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I was helping with 'help for

Posted on Fri, 30 Aug 2024

I was helping with 'help for families with difficulties with young children' at a time when Asperghers started to get mentioned in meetings of helpers. And I kept thinking as aspects of it were mentioned, 'Oh, that sounds like my youngest son's...

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (extract) - Respite

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So many memories there to be

Posted on Wed, 28 Aug 2024

So many memories there to be touched and remembered together and talked of, and still the delight of doing so together whatever ups and downs they had gone through together down the many years. Rhiannon

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Posted in What happened when Grandpa gave Grandma a miniature doll’s hardware shop on their 55th year anniversary

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It certainly had a shape and

Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2024

It certainly had a shape and completeness though stirring the thoughts of 'could it have been otherwise' and 'what brought it all about'. I think what was most shocking, but realistic, was the confession that he had deliberately provoked their...

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Posted in Epilogue: The Lost Manuscript

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It is a real problem! My

Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2024

It is a real problem! My frustration is that parents are so often talking to their young children while looking at their phone. Children need eye-contact and the feeling of undivided attention and interest. Rhiannon

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Posted in A Martian Sends a Postcard Home 2024

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I seem to have missed this

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024

I seem to have missed this before. You always write smoothly. I still think that the intrigue of claimed mysterious sightings, whether trickery, imagination or real are a distraction from investigating the mysteries of life whose sollutions have...

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Posted in Tom Crean

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