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A deeply moving description
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
A deeply moving description of alienation. The fragmentary form of the poem suits the subject matter. (Should steeling time's soundings be stealing time's soundings?)
Lines that particularly affected me were: "beats...Read full comment
Posted in severed soul
Pow! An explosion of colour,
Posted on Sun, 16 Sep 2018
Pow! An explosion of colour, intense emotion and passion. You have a way of making us fall in love with your magical characters because your words have a ring of truth about them. Like a Leonard Cohen lyric.Read full comment
Posted in Tangerine static
This took me by surprise.
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
This took me by surprise. Sharply beautiful and very moving. It reveals a hidden aspect of your personality and suggests a different direction for your creative imagination. She IS your daughter, and you are her father.Read full comment
Posted in I have an imaginary daughter
Those of us familiar with
Posted on Sat, 02 Jun 2018
Those of us familiar with Lavadis's bleak inner universe suspect, and probably with good reason, that his unfortunate young protagonist will eventually prevail against outrageous fortune (and outrageous mother) and embark upon a fabulous...Read full comment
Posted in And? - Bedlam
There is much beauty revealed
Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2017
There is much beauty revealed with each new reading of this long, moving lament. So many lines linger in the mind:
"A year not lived in time lost forever in rhyme."
"Lain bare its ashen self ... there."
"To enfold the newest...
Posted in You Ask Me “How Am I”
I suggest you hop onto the
Posted on Sat, 10 Jun 2017
I suggest you hop onto the next available Eurostar!Read full comment
Heart-wrenching, this raw and
Posted on Fri, 20 Jan 2017
Heart-wrenching, this raw and honest expression of pain and despair. And so sad to learn just how long the chilling emptiness at the heart of your life has existed, hidden behind the smiling warmth of your lively persona and your busy life....Read full comment
Posted in once life January 18, 2017