Sir Loin

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I have 24 stories published in 5 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 6813 times and 5 of my stories have been cherry picked.

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I've taught myself over the years that I can get really good at any skill so long as I practice it. I've just started practicing storytelling not too long ago and while I am not any good at yet now, I hope to exel in it in due time.

STATUS: Trying to make it to the end of a project.

 

My stories

Swept Under: Chapter 4: (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

‘All she had to do was take to stupid book, but ended up causing a whole scene. I shouldn’t have said yes to her dumb plan,’ thought Maxis. Trevor...

Swept Under: Chapter 3: (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

“We’ve been trying for half an hour to get hold of her mother.” “Well keep trying.” Karina’s ears woke up first, then her skin, which started to...

Swept Under: Chapter 2: (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

“I was late home today, y‘know.” “Realy? Why was that?” “Some boys almost died at the beach.” The dinner table fell silent for a moment. “What...

Swept Under: Chapter 1: draft (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

Maxis, with the rest of the class, watched from the shore as the event unfolded. He saw the lifeguard jump in as soon as Cameron and Trevor's heads...
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Swept Under: Prologue: (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

Waves coiled and crashed against the surface of the water. The wind howled while volleyballs were being punted through the warm breeze and into the...

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