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I have 1184 stories published in 6 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2546825 times and 441 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2241 of my 18,113 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2321 votes

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Still enjoying and looking

Posted on Tue, 08 Jul 2014

Still enjoying and looking forward to reading more.

Just wanted to mention a couple of mistakes I noticed.

Last paragraph you say:-  taking a huge        looking for something they had no idea existed or not.

Also:-

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Posted in Into Darkness: Chapter 2, Section(s): 2

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A touching piece of writing

Posted on Thu, 26 Jun 2014

A touching piece of writing Tina.

If only we could bottle up moments in time and uncork them at our leasure,   we could once more be with our mums when their health was fine and although not always perfect,  at least we had shared moments...

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Posted in Life on Mars

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Hi there Moya,

Posted on Wed, 04 Jun 2014

Hi there Moya,

my prediction is that you will finish this story, because it's good and look at the amount of readers you have,  they all want you to finish,  as do I.

Good luck with ideas  ...

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Posted in The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Eight - 1162 words

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Hi Moya,

Posted on Wed, 04 Jun 2014

Hi Moya,

I just love it when a story leaves you with a cliff hanger.  Now I'm looking forward to finding out if Jamie gets discovered...hope he doesn't.

Great work. ...

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Posted in The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Eight - 1162 words

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Maya Angelou wrote of hope in

Posted on Thu, 29 May 2014

Maya Angelou wrote of hope in her poem Rise.  So like her poem you also speak of hope too,  not always as we expect,  but it's always there welcoming us to a brand new day.  From every tradgedy comes good...even though it feels like there's no...

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Posted in Rise

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A most interesting read. 

Posted on Thu, 29 May 2014

A most interesting read.  Thank you for sending in.

Jenny.

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Posted in Essays Musical and Literary

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A great,  seductive story

Posted on Thu, 08 May 2014

A great,  seductive story that had me there with you from beginning to end.

Very much enjoyed.

Jenny.

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Posted in Will's Apartment

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Reading this poem Tina, 

Posted on Wed, 07 May 2014

Reading this poem Tina,  brings back the importance of good health and how as humans we can never take anything for granted.

They say love...

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Posted in Since Parkinson's was His

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Hi Moya,

Posted on Thu, 10 Apr 2014

Hi Moya,

you know before the invention of the computer,  I used to write stories and I was the only one who ever got to read them. 

I hope you don't mind me saying,  but If I were you I wouldn't worry to much about getting parts on...

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Posted in The Labour Planet A Working Title Part Five

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Some stirring memories here

Posted on Wed, 07 May 2014

Some stirring memories here Tina.

No matter how much time passes,  we cannot forget our roots,  the places...smells...tastes all have a place in our recollections.

Like you said in a previous poem,  I wouldn't want to go back to...

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Posted in Women of a Certain Age

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