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I like how you explain the fact that we humans are all individual, drawn to some kindred spirits that have a deep impact on our lives. The prism is a very clever idea too, it's what makes the world go round and shines on us all...
What a fantastic poem Rachel. I too would love to put my ear to the earth and listen to those underground sounds, only problem is I'd never get back up. ...
you have had this experience of a stroke and come back to tell the tale, it proves you are an important part of life. Your love for writing is such a great art and I hope you continue to share with us your poems and prose....
You've said it all as far as I'm concerned. Everything you mentioned is how I feel and more. It upsets me that we are loosing our history whether good or bad, as you mention what's done is done.
To be inspired by childhood books is the best feeling. Those adventures sleep in corners of our minds to one day be awoken and inspire stories of our own. Like you I had a love of reading, but your library sounds amazing, like walking into a...
Your poem left me quite
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020
Your poem left me quite tearful. The fact that Obaysch tried so hard to be loved and accepted, yet this was seen as a weakness. Very sad indeed.
Your writing held a lot of strong emotion.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in To my imaginary child
Hi Penny,
Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2020
Hi Penny,
I like how you explain the fact that we humans are all individual, drawn to some kindred spirits that have a deep impact on our lives. The prism is a very clever idea too, it's what makes the world go round and shines on us all...
Read full commentPosted in "Perception"
What a fantastic poem Rachel.
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020
What a fantastic poem Rachel. I too would love to put my ear to the earth and listen to those underground sounds, only problem is I'd never get back up. ...
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Dear Luigi,
Posted on Wed, 29 Jul 2020
Dear Luigi,
you have had this experience of a stroke and come back to tell the tale, it proves you are an important part of life. Your love for writing is such a great art and I hope you continue to share with us your poems and prose....
Read full commentPosted in Out Of the Blue (Rimas Dissolutas)
A gripping poem Rachel, the
Posted on Sun, 26 Jul 2020
A gripping poem Rachel, the ocean has many stories to tell, this is one.
My kind of poem indeed.
Jenny
Read full commentPosted in Beadlet Anemone
You've said it all as far as
Posted on Sun, 26 Jul 2020
You've said it all as far as I'm concerned. Everything you mentioned is how I feel and more. It upsets me that we are loosing our history whether good or bad, as you mention what's done is done.
Being a born and bred Bristolian, I don't...
Read full commentPosted in Why Can't We Keep Our History?
Loved this tribute to the
Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020
Loved this tribute to the dandelion Di, they will still be here long after we're gone.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in remembering dandelions (again)
Hello Di,
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020
Hello Di,
I know nothing about Haiku poems, but wondered if this was one?
I like how you question where breezes come from and how we have no idea about the air we breathe.in and out comes and goes.
Of course like you say, it...
Read full commentPosted in breezy
To be inspired by childhood
Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2020
To be inspired by childhood books is the best feeling. Those adventures sleep in corners of our minds to one day be awoken and inspire stories of our own. Like you I had a love of reading, but your library sounds amazing, like walking into a...
Read full commentPosted in "Once Upon a Place to Read"
Hello Di,
Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2020
Hello Di,
can't believe I missed this delightful poem. You give the grasshopper a personality with the lines:-
here, in warm air, low harboured, still, sound
like faint mechanical maraccas
signals a grasshopper's...
Read full commentPosted in 10th july grasshopper
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