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Wouldn't it be wonderful if
Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could bottle and cork those precious moments we share with loved ones? To be able to open at leisure, so we could with all our senses, enjoy once more.
Your words touched a chord Tina, from one who finds it...
your poems are always reflective of what you see and feel. This one arouses my feelings for nature, being one who suffers a great sorrow when yet another tree is cut down, that has maybe stood for many years and deserves to be...
I can honestly say, reading this is as near to being with my dad in the hospice after he had a massage from one of the nurses, never having had one before, he practically swooned to the point he would have kissed her, had he had...
just read this amazing poem and some of the comments, it left me speechless, as so much as already been said. The only thing I can add, is that you brought so much energy in your words, as you point out the sea can be your friend,...
Wouldn't it be wonderful if
Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could bottle and cork those precious moments we share with loved ones? To be able to open at leisure, so we could with all our senses, enjoy once more.
Your words touched a chord Tina, from one who finds it...
Read full commentPosted in The Letting Go
Hi Rob,
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
Hi Rob,
your poems are always reflective of what you see and feel. This one arouses my feelings for nature, being one who suffers a great sorrow when yet another tree is cut down, that has maybe stood for many years and deserves to be...
Read full commentPosted in 'Spirits of the Soul'
Loved the metaphors in this
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
Loved the metaphors in this poem:
Chaining old times to the grass as we picked it and laughed. Great line.
Also:
She lit a small candle
which flustered a seeming cool
in the bright fired air. And soon after...
Read full commentPosted in Out of This World
This is such a thought
Posted on Sat, 30 May 2015
This is such a thought provoking poem Shannan. I agree with Bee, just love the idea of capturing petals, before they are cried as tears.
I have many dried rose petals which I've collected over the years, they all hold memories, good and...
Read full commentPosted in From Blooms to Perfumes
Hi Tina,
Posted on Wed, 10 Jun 2015
Hi Tina,
I can honestly say, reading this is as near to being with my dad in the hospice after he had a massage from one of the nurses, never having had one before, he practically swooned to the point he would have kissed her, had he had...
Read full commentPosted in Angels Don't Dye...Do They?
Hi Rob,
Posted on Thu, 04 Jun 2015
Hi Rob,
just read this amazing poem and some of the comments, it left me speechless, as so much as already been said. The only thing I can add, is that you brought so much energy in your words, as you point out the sea can be your friend,...
Read full commentPosted in 'Loyalty'
This brought back so many
Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2015
This brought back so many memories for me reading. It's such an emotional piece, I found myself shedding a tear as I read.
Written with such honesty and love. I commend you for your brave homage to your mother.
I took a lot from...
Read full commentPosted in Mum, I promise I won't let guilt consume me
Oh Tina, I flet so much
Posted on Sat, 21 Mar 2015
Oh Tina, I felt so much saddness at reading this piece. Those poor creatures that you got so much pleasure from, now gone.
A loving, tender poem that brings to mind the savageness of nature, that is inevitable.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in 'White as Diamonds'
Hi Tina,
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2015
Hi Tina,
poor Brody, just the thought of Cam would make my blood boil. Like how the last bit makes you think that maybe Cam was growing on Brody.
A great story told in such a way, it kept me glued to the page.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in One Night Only (Part 2)
A real Armageddon scene
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2015
A real Armageddon scene described brilliantly here in this desolate poem of despair.
Very good read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Riding the Static, Part III: Skeletal
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