TJW

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I have 47 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 14097 times and 27 of my stories have been cherry picked.
89 of my 394 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 90 votes

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Imbedded

The bar called Geometry has its last call at 0000 H; what civvies call midnight. She has no choice. State law demands it. She must be she. It’s a law...
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Cherry

The Fog of War

—-------static—------static—-------whisky wan fower—--copy? Copy?------static—--whi—wan fower copy? —--------- —--- tango threep fife, this is whisky...
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Cherry

The Clinic

Post Traumatic Stress Disorder. Doesn’t that sound clean, clinical? There was a trauma, it stressed me out, and forever afterwards I will be...
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Ode to a Corporal

He didn’t look at peace or like he was asleep He looked very dead fetal and small shot in the head Small as if his mortality was already being...

Evolution of Language

I have memory problems so I thinks it was a couple of weeks ago when I was at work driving a military grade vehilce to haul shipment, common thing...

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89 of my comments have received 90 Great Feedback votes

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Beautiful.  V/R  TJ

Posted on Sat, 17 Sep 2022

Beautiful. 

V/R 

TJ

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Posted in Harebells

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Snakes are fine.  Eating less

Posted on Tue, 06 Sep 2022

Snakes are fine.  Eating less than they used to but they're old.  Took the boa outside yesterday.  She hung out with me while I read.  Or tried to; she kept coming up for a kiss and I ended ready the same paragraph endlessly. Here's one for you X...

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Posted in Chemo 8

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little jeannie,

Posted on Tue, 06 Sep 2022

little jeannie,

Get that shirt, darlin', had a trooper who went gone for a while, restricted to quarters at the FOB, came back.  What was the problem, man?  Cancer.  Shit.  What're you doing here? War won't kill cancer.  No, but it might...

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Posted in Chemo 8

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This is hilarious.  Got a

Posted on Mon, 05 Sep 2022

This is hilarious.  Got a real MASH quality to it, love that show.  The chevron attracted me, hey, what's this about?  sleeve insignia, gonna find out, brought me my first smile in a few days, grateful, and I was a sergeant (first class/first...

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Posted in Winning Through

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Hello yourself.

Posted on Tue, 09 Aug 2022

Hello yourself.

Dunno why trees are slaughtered.  Don't people like to breathe?  I comment cause I enjoy your writing.  Sometimes I wish you wouldn't be so hard, Di_Hard; relax and soften.  Even Nature isn't aggressive all the time.

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Posted in logging evidence of us

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Hunting ain't a sport.  A

Posted on Tue, 09 Aug 2022

Hunting ain't a sport.  A sport means both sides know the game.  Landlord wanted to cut some branches off the live oak on my front yard in preparation for hurricane season.  Told him I would not allow certain branches because squirrels use them...

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Posted in logging evidence of us

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little Jeanie,

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022

little Jeanie,

weight, blood pressure, temp, hell, that's more than we got before being sent back out.  Any bullet holes?  Get out there.  Stay STRAC, sweetheart, writing is your best nonmedical medicine.

 Jack

 

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Posted in Chemo 7

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Anything swift being baked

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022

Anything swift being baked emphasizes the intensity of the heat. Baking, to me, is a slow, patient process, so the swiftness not preventing the baking intensifies the heat.  Helluva hot poem.  Much obliged for the read.

 

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Posted in View Beyond

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