two people saing goodbye

Hector and Marcos are called in to investigate a haunted downtown building. A tragic event is the key to solving the haunting, but will they learn the truth in order to set the ghosts free?

read and think ?

Calban travels south through Marta City to visit his career orientated parents in hope of sympathy.

another old song

The train paused and crept past invisible monkeys leaping from tree top to tree top the trees winterstick canopies bent waving like fronds in a tidal pond The earths green skin leaked

A time has come to take a leap, yet this faith, we still keep that our dreams will find us while we sleep.

I have changed the punctuation and format to this piece- any feedback would be appreciated.