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That first stanza is a great
Posted on Sun, 19 Dec 2021
That first stanza is a great beginning, and you've woven the lyrics into your poem very cleverly. Weirdly never ever get tired of that song, always sends shivers up my spine the first few notes :0)
Read full commentPosted in A Fairy Tale of New York
Thanyou so much Jane! I hope
Posted on Fri, 17 Dec 2021
Thanyou so much Jane! I hope you have a wonderful Christmas
Read full commentPosted in Day before a birthday
I like the Haiku, with the
Posted on Fri, 17 Dec 2021
I like the Haiku, with the echoing vowels inside :0) Good facts again!
Read full commentPosted in 17
Oh! How wonderful you found
Posted on Wed, 15 Dec 2021
Oh! How wonderful you found him in time and can take care of him!
Writing Exercise for you :
A poem, one verse for each cat, how you found them, what they are like. Must have your brilliant rhymes and rhythm
will cheer...
Read full commentPosted in Pine Tree (in Home and on Heath)
Am glad you went further with
Posted on Thu, 16 Dec 2021
Am glad you went further with this idea from one of your comments :0)
Read full commentPosted in Christmas With Monsieur Bublé
You are so good at scene
Posted on Wed, 15 Dec 2021
You are so good at scene setting! This paragrapgh is BRILLIANT
"…He could see himself walking along a sidewalk, snow and slush was all around. People passed by, some with newspapers under arms, one man wearing a fedora with a...
Read full commentPosted in Saints and Sinners – A Christmas Fable (Part Two of Two)
That's a lovely link, the
Posted on Tue, 14 Dec 2021
That's a lovely link, the moon and sonnets :0)
Read full commentPosted in 14
Treasured greeter is exactly
Posted on Mon, 13 Dec 2021
Treasured greeter is exactly right! I liked how you made robins seem magical, I don't know if it is the sharpness of their gorgeous song but they do seem to cut through the mundane world somehow as if they can fly between planes
Read full commentPosted in Robin At Winter Solstice
Doesn't have to be fantasy
Posted on Sun, 12 Dec 2021
Doesn't have to be fantasy fantasy? I know you are top of the world when it comes to anecdotes, real life funny stories, but could you set yourself the challenge of wondering how some of your favourite characters from your encounters...
Read full commentPosted in It Being December
That's really good! As in
Posted on Sun, 12 Dec 2021
That's really good! As in other of your writing, I liked the details, the "whorls of wood" in the bar counter, the mother and child going to the toilet. These stop it being a story, make me feel that I am there. "Paraffin of self pity" is...
Read full commentPosted in Saints and Sinners - A Christmas Fable (Part One of Two)
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