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I loved this bit too.
Posted on Thu, 20 Aug 2020
I loved this bit too.
Don't know how bothered you are about horsey stuff? Do you think they should water Buck before swimming in the hot spring? And last bit, he's been galloping away from a bear and all he gets is hobbled?
Even...
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I love the idea of the men
Posted on Tue, 18 Aug 2020
I love the idea of the men singing in secret. And that, left to itself, with no PE lessons the field is full of birds, who also sing. As if singing is mens' natural state
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Oh, this is AWEFUL!!! Because
Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2020
Oh, this is AWEFUL!!! Because you have made Emmett and Abi so real, it's horrible to think of them like this, Abigail having to watch stuff. This bit at the end is AMAZING!!!
'I cain't take bein' this scared,' he said. 'I cain't take it...
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Please could you explain the
Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2020
Please could you explain the significance of listening to white noise between questions? How does Elizondo know about him having Rueda's phone?
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You ARE a great poet
Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2020
You ARE a great poet, because you love words and it shows
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The feeling of togetherness
Posted on Sun, 16 Aug 2020
The feeling of togetherness is wonderful in your poem, very interesting to compare with the sort of poem people write at the beginning of a relationship.
I love the first stanza! "Perseverance hand in hand" is brilliant :0) The image...
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My son asked me what the
Posted on Wed, 12 Aug 2020
My son asked me what the difference was between a vagabond and a nomad? I guess Martinez must look like a vagabond for the cafe owner to be like this. An ominous episode! I don't mind nothing big is happening? They come in small chunks, each one...
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"weeping days of crushed rose
Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2020
"weeping days of crushed rose petals" beautiful!
I hope you are feeling a bit better? Have just read your other poem, and understand better after reading this. No wonder Summer is difficult for you! And now all these...
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Hi Jenny. Hug from me too :0)
Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020
Hi Jenny. Hug from me too :0) Missing my Dad just now. Even when I knew there was nothing he could do about something, just his caring made it seem not so bad. But I am glad he is spared what's happening these days.
There is so much of...
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I liked the message in your
Posted on Mon, 03 Aug 2020
I liked the message in your poem very much. It is a deep meaning :0) More deep than any description of sea monsters could be! Has made me happy
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