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My daughter lives in Stoke

Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021

My daughter lives in Stoke
Well Newcastle-under-Lyme as she always corrects me. There is an anthemic feel to this. I look forward to your forthcoming music gig performed in front of a virtual ABCtales audience :)

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A comprehensive update

Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021

A comprehensive update including family history and featuring Charles Dickens. The text has come out in different sizes - just wondered if that was what was intended.

Merry Christmas to you and your family, Jean. Paul

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"flustered by widdershin

Posted on Tue, 21 Dec 2021

"flustered by widdershin stirred". Yes, some things are best left in the past and maybe it's easier and for the best that time moves forward in a linear manner. Some lovely expressions in here in a very visual poem. Paul :)

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Read with trepidation. I am

Posted on Thu, 16 Dec 2021

Read with trepidation. I am at the point in the season where I am reaching for a gun if I hear one more Buble song crooned on the radio. Thankfully, your poem was a feast of sophistication and curiosity and no direct reflection of more "Buble...

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Those last 5 lines, in

Posted on Fri, 17 Dec 2021

Those last 5 lines, in particular, are brilliant. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. Paul :)

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Nicely done. Again :) Paul

Posted on Fri, 17 Dec 2021

Nicely done. Again :) Paul

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Such a wonderful array of

Posted on Sat, 18 Dec 2021

Such a wonderful array of facts. I keep meaning to look up the definition of a haiku and now there's no need. And very interesting thoughts about the number 13. These are such a pleasure to read, Rhiannon. Paul

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Stunning poem

Posted on Sun, 19 Dec 2021

Stunning poem

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Who knew bourbon biscuits

Posted on Thu, 16 Dec 2021

Who knew bourbon biscuits could have such significant historica context? In a multiverse somewhere, all of those scenarios played out. Mind bending, isn't it?

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Love those last couple of

Posted on Tue, 14 Dec 2021

Love those last couple of lines, in particular. These short poems are deft work, Di. Enjoyable to read. Paul :)

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