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1505 of my comments have received 1521 Great Feedback votes

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"...only dead now really

Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021

"...only dead now really understand." I was right there with you, Jenny.

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Posted in Timeless Wonder

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A Chilling insight into a

Posted on Tue, 29 Jun 2021

A Chilling insight into a character with fatal flaws. Nicely done.

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A bubbling cauldron of a poem

Posted on Sat, 26 Jun 2021

A bubbling cauldron of a poem. Sounds like it was quite a site/sight. Super read. Paul

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The last paragraph is ominous

Posted on Thu, 24 Jun 2021

The last paragraph is ominous and a clear signpost. It doesn't look out of place. I guess you need to decide where you pick up now having made it clear about what comes next. Do you jump close to the events you have signalled or take a slower run...

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Eesh brutal ending. Great

Posted on Wed, 23 Jun 2021

Eesh brutal ending. Great dialogue and I like the way you built the rationale. Good work!

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I remember watching "Roots"

Posted on Wed, 23 Jun 2021

I remember watching "Roots" as a child. It left quite an impression on me. Really powerful story.

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Posted in Mr A.N.Muggins Gets Criticized For Thinking Openly About The World's Problems (Without Having A Clear Plan)

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It's well documented that

Posted on Thu, 17 Jun 2021

It's well documented that there is a global crisis with bee numbers. Endeavours like this will help along with a much greater, general awareness of how to preserve/increase numbers. Your knowledge of flora is exemplary. What a super read. Paul...

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I have visited Stirling

Posted on Wed, 16 Jun 2021

I have visited Stirling Castle many years ago. It's magnificent. Edward I is most associated with invading Scotland known in his lifetime as "The Hammer of the Scots". I wonder whether shortbread was around in his time? Another entertaining read...

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Gorgeous :)

Posted on Sun, 13 Jun 2021

Gorgeous :)

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"..jumped up randy-dandy."

Posted on Tue, 15 Jun 2021

"..jumped up randy-dandy." Nicely done, Sean!

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