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StoryThe Visitable Past Ewan75 years 8 months ago
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StoryLove Is Where We Belong mcscraic65 years 9 months ago
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StoryA Reliable Source luigi_pagano45 years 9 months ago
StoryThe Arm Farm - 6 mac_ashton25 years 9 months ago
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StoryJaspernon The Prince: The Rise of the Cult of the Goddess: Ch.3 : Part 3 Patience, the Concubine, and the King (Section 2) Kurt Rellians25 years 9 months ago
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Story2030: A Space Odyssey (Brave New World): flash fiction 250 words max marandina55 years 9 months ago
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1709 of my comments have received 1753 Great Feedback votes

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An entertaining, disturbing

Posted on Fri, 07 Jan 2022

An entertaining, disturbing story. [Should that say "Anyone else but Heather..." in paragraph 9?]. Very nicely done, Luigi. Paul

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What a highly, visual poem. I

Posted on Fri, 07 Jan 2022

What a highly, visual poem. I was walking with you. A delight. Paul

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Posted in Near Upper Kinsham

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A Bank Holiday to take down

Posted on Wed, 05 Jan 2022

A Bank Holiday to take down Christmas trees and Mrs Muggins becoming the new Oliver Cromwell and banning Christmas. This could be the best Muggins adventure so far!

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Posted in Offences Against The Christmas Spirit (A list of crimes and offences against the sacred Spirit of Christmas) by Mr Alfred N.Muggins

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Fascinating footnote.

Posted on Thu, 06 Jan 2022

Fascinating footnote. Tradition I wasn't aware of. Your poem captures the essence of the occasion so well. Nicely done, sir. Paul

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Posted in For Yer Women, the Women

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Another cliffhanger Will she,

Posted on Thu, 06 Jan 2022

Another cliffhanger Will she, won't she? Great dialogue, as always. Looking forward to the next instalment. Paul

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Posted in Disenchantment 46

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Fascinating story, well told.

Posted on Mon, 03 Jan 2022

Fascinating story, well told. One man's trash is another man's treasure.

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Posted in A Tribute to a Formerly Unknown Artist

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All manner of life contained

Posted on Tue, 04 Jan 2022

All manner of life contained in in throw away conversations. Nicely done and congrats on the POTD. Paul

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Posted in Charity Shop Girls

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Interesting to note the rows

Posted on Wed, 05 Jan 2022

Interesting to note the rows between the English and Irish girls and how they were resolved. Are you planning to consolidate all of this into a book, Jean? Looking forward to reading more. Paul [Title needs an edit]

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 20

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Strong dialogue and plenty of

Posted on Mon, 03 Jan 2022

Strong dialogue and plenty of intrigue. Looking forward to the next instalment. Paul :)

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 23

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Beautifully done. Such

Posted on Fri, 31 Dec 2021

Beautifully done. Such precision with your words. Happy New Year to you, Rhiannon. Paul

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