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1516 of my comments have received 1533 Great Feedback votes

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Love the first couple of

Posted on Fri, 06 Aug 2021

Love the first couple of lines...and the last two lines...and the lines in between. Oh..it's a super poem! :)

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What a wondrous image. That

Posted on Wed, 04 Aug 2021

What a wondrous image. That must have been such a wonderful sight. Your poem beautifully done, of course. Paul x

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Sounded like quite a ceremony

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

Sounded like quite a ceremony. I imagine it must be difficult to accept step parents. It's a shame when a wonderful occasion gets overshadowed by bad feelings.

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Some nifty wordplay, Rhiannon

Posted on Mon, 02 Aug 2021

Some nifty wordplay, Rhiannon. Not as easy as it looks. Nicely done. Paul :)

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So much to ponder with an

Posted on Mon, 02 Aug 2021

So much to ponder with an infinite number of variables at the end. I look forward to part 2 lol

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That's a mischievous ending

Posted on Sun, 01 Aug 2021

That's a mischievous ending to this episode. Still following..

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Happy Lammas and a wonderful

Posted on Sun, 01 Aug 2021

Happy Lammas and a wonderful summation, of course :)

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Reminds me of Glastonbury

Posted on Sat, 31 Jul 2021

Reminds me of Glastonbury Village. Beautiful imagery so well described. Paul :)

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Purpled Trojan princes

Posted on Fri, 30 Jul 2021

Purpled Trojan princes driving pimped BMWs. I really should read up on the historical inference in this poem. Certainly entertaining and, I imagine, cleverly done. Great stuff!

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Up to date again. The

Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021

Up to date again. The dialogue and chemistry across your characters is very strong. The differentiation is credible and is the essence of this series. Keep going. It's great stuff.

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