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| Story | Private Heaven | marandina | 0 | 13 years 1 month ago |
| Forum topic | crop circles juliet oc | josiedog | 4 | 20 years 5 months ago |
| Forum topic | At the going down of the sun. | QueenElf | 3 | 20 years 5 months ago |
| Forum topic | Down And Out In The Jobcentre by QueenElf | tara_hanks | 11 | 20 years 5 months ago |
| Forum topic | Chinese Whispers by marandina | tcook | 4 | 20 years 6 months ago |
Just gorgeous. Merry
Posted on Fri, 24 Dec 2021
Just gorgeous. Merry Christmas to you, lovely Jenny. Paul x
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Another engaging tale, well
Posted on Thu, 23 Dec 2021
Another engaging tale, well told. And a time theme running all the way through, cleverly done. Your humour makes your writing so very readable. Nicely done, again. Paul :)
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"swarf curls on night's sharp
Posted on Mon, 20 Dec 2021
"swarf curls on night's sharp edge" You are on a roll with these. Beautiful words :)
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A witty, clever story. Aliens
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
A witty, clever story. Aliens are ideal for "fish out of water" scenarios. Enjoyed this. Merry Christmas. Paul
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Nicely done, Rhiannon. [And
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
Nicely done, Rhiannon. [And thank you for the thoughtful comment on my graveyard poem. I took it down to re-write as it felt too maudlin.]
Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas. Paul :)
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My daughter lives in Stoke
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
My daughter lives in Stoke
Read full commentWell Newcastle-under-Lyme as she always corrects me. There is an anthemic feel to this. I look forward to your forthcoming music gig performed in front of a virtual ABCtales audience :)
Posted in They Think I’ve Gone Berserk (with music video)
A comprehensive update
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
A comprehensive update including family history and featuring Charles Dickens. The text has come out in different sizes - just wondered if that was what was intended.
Merry Christmas to you and your family, Jean. Paul
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"flustered by widdershin
Posted on Tue, 21 Dec 2021
"flustered by widdershin stirred". Yes, some things are best left in the past and maybe it's easier and for the best that time moves forward in a linear manner. Some lovely expressions in here in a very visual poem. Paul :)
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Read with trepidation. I am
Posted on Thu, 16 Dec 2021
Read with trepidation. I am at the point in the season where I am reaching for a gun if I hear one more Buble song crooned on the radio. Thankfully, your poem was a feast of sophistication and curiosity and no direct reflection of more "Buble...
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Those last 5 lines, in
Posted on Fri, 17 Dec 2021
Those last 5 lines, in particular, are brilliant. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. Paul :)
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