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1602 of my comments have received 1629 Great Feedback votes

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Up to date again. The

Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021

Up to date again. The dialogue and chemistry across your characters is very strong. The differentiation is credible and is the essence of this series. Keep going. It's great stuff.

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Nicely done, Rhiannon. Words

Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021

Nicely done, Rhiannon. Words carefully intertwined with a nice rhythm and an underlying message. Hoping you are well. Paul :)

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Posted in False Hope

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Dreamy, beautiful and

Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021

Dreamy, beautiful and optimistic. Congrats on the POTD, sir.

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Posted in The Wonder of it All

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Ah Levelupland - is that

Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021

Ah Levelupland - is that close to Huddersfield? Another enjoyable virtual walk with Ewan and the woofer :)

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".. like buck's brief

Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021

".. like buck's brief stillness before the charge." I did see it was a Buck Moon recently. I enjoyed this poem and the comments left in this thread. Inspirational and informative. Paul :)

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Posted in Force Of Life

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A familiar theme for another

Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021

A familiar theme for another of your poems, Richard. Out camping listening to the trill of loons. Beautiful moments captured in verse.

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Posted in An Encounter With Self

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I can only imagine how

Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021

I can only imagine how terrifying it must have been to have been involved with a ship sinking. Always feels like newspaper reports were so much more detailed in the past compared to these days.

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Posted in Maria's Diary 35 The Shipwreck

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There's a lot in there to

Posted on Wed, 21 Jul 2021

There's a lot in there to think about. In the end, we only have the one blue planet. Wise words carefully crafted in a super poem, of course.

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Posted in Instead of throwing money at the sky

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Evocative, visual poem with a

Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021

Evocative, visual poem with a great last line :)

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Posted in later

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Just a stellar poem - one of

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

Just a stellar poem - one of your very best.

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Posted in The First Stars

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