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1578 of my comments have received 1602 Great Feedback votes

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Some nifty wordplay, Rhiannon

Posted on Mon, 02 Aug 2021

Some nifty wordplay, Rhiannon. Not as easy as it looks. Nicely done. Paul :)

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Posted in Caution!

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So much to ponder with an

Posted on Mon, 02 Aug 2021

So much to ponder with an infinite number of variables at the end. I look forward to part 2 lol

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Posted in Focus on the lips

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That's a mischievous ending

Posted on Sun, 01 Aug 2021

That's a mischievous ending to this episode. Still following..

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 14

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Happy Lammas and a wonderful

Posted on Sun, 01 Aug 2021

Happy Lammas and a wonderful summation, of course :)

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Posted in Lammas

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Reminds me of Glastonbury

Posted on Sat, 31 Jul 2021

Reminds me of Glastonbury Village. Beautiful imagery so well described. Paul :)

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Purpled Trojan princes

Posted on Fri, 30 Jul 2021

Purpled Trojan princes driving pimped BMWs. I really should read up on the historical inference in this poem. Certainly entertaining and, I imagine, cleverly done. Great stuff!

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Up to date again. The

Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021

Up to date again. The dialogue and chemistry across your characters is very strong. The differentiation is credible and is the essence of this series. Keep going. It's great stuff.

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 13

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Nicely done, Rhiannon. Words

Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021

Nicely done, Rhiannon. Words carefully intertwined with a nice rhythm and an underlying message. Hoping you are well. Paul :)

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Posted in False Hope

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Dreamy, beautiful and

Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021

Dreamy, beautiful and optimistic. Congrats on the POTD, sir.

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Posted in The Wonder of it All

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Ah Levelupland - is that

Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021

Ah Levelupland - is that close to Huddersfield? Another enjoyable virtual walk with Ewan and the woofer :)

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