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Forum topicChinese Whispers by marandina tcook419 years 6 months ago

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1499 of my comments have received 1515 Great Feedback votes

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Big finish, well said.

Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021

Big finish, well said.

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Posted in Broken wings still fly

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There's some detailed

Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021

There's some detailed research gone into this. Strong dialogue. Still following.

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Posted in Disenchantment 21

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Henry VIII - a huge figure in

Posted on Mon, 01 Feb 2021

Henry VIII - a huge figure in the long lineage of English kings. He definitely stood no messing!

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Posted in A Comparison Of The Dissolution Of The Monasteries and The Dissolution Of Europe : by Mr Alfred N.Muggins

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Birds seem to provide

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

Birds seem to provide inspiration for poems more than any other creature. They really are wonderful, aren't they?

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Posted in Herring Gull

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Thanks for the read and

Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021

Thanks for the read and comment, CM. It's based on a skiing holiday I went on aged 14 with the school. My mom won some money at bingo that paid for it. I spent all day falling off a ski lift. Then the following day it clicked and I finally made...

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Posted in A Secret Forest

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I think you've captured their

Posted on Mon, 25 Jan 2021

I think you've captured their fragility amongst other traits very nicely :)

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Posted in Sheep

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Some great descriptions

Posted on Thu, 21 Jan 2021

Some great descriptions bringing scenes to life along with credible exposition. Nice work.

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Posted in Disenchantment 18

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Stunning poem.

Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2021

Stunning poem.

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Posted in To a Lone Sailor

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Succinct but lovely. Let's

Posted on Wed, 20 Jan 2021

Succinct but lovely. Let's hope winter ends soon.

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Posted in Out of safety to please

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Nicely imagined. We should

Posted on Fri, 15 Jan 2021

Nicely imagined. We should speak to trees all the time! :)

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Posted in Apple Tree

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