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Up to date again. The
Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021
Up to date again. The dialogue and chemistry across your characters is very strong. The differentiation is credible and is the essence of this series. Keep going. It's great stuff.
".. like buck's brief stillness before the charge." I did see it was a Buck Moon recently. I enjoyed this poem and the comments left in this thread. Inspirational and informative. Paul :)
I can only imagine how terrifying it must have been to have been involved with a ship sinking. Always feels like newspaper reports were so much more detailed in the past compared to these days.
Up to date again. The
Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021
Up to date again. The dialogue and chemistry across your characters is very strong. The differentiation is credible and is the essence of this series. Keep going. It's great stuff.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 13
Nicely done, Rhiannon. Words
Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021
Nicely done, Rhiannon. Words carefully intertwined with a nice rhythm and an underlying message. Hoping you are well. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in False Hope
Dreamy, beautiful and
Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021
Dreamy, beautiful and optimistic. Congrats on the POTD, sir.
Read full commentPosted in The Wonder of it All
Ah Levelupland - is that
Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021
Ah Levelupland - is that close to Huddersfield? Another enjoyable virtual walk with Ewan and the woofer :)
Read full commentPosted in Woodland Walk
".. like buck's brief
Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021
".. like buck's brief stillness before the charge." I did see it was a Buck Moon recently. I enjoyed this poem and the comments left in this thread. Inspirational and informative. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in Force Of Life
A familiar theme for another
Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021
A familiar theme for another of your poems, Richard. Out camping listening to the trill of loons. Beautiful moments captured in verse.
Read full commentPosted in An Encounter With Self
I can only imagine how
Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021
I can only imagine how terrifying it must have been to have been involved with a ship sinking. Always feels like newspaper reports were so much more detailed in the past compared to these days.
Read full commentPosted in Maria's Diary 35 The Shipwreck
There's a lot in there to
Posted on Wed, 21 Jul 2021
There's a lot in there to think about. In the end, we only have the one blue planet. Wise words carefully crafted in a super poem, of course.
Read full commentPosted in Instead of throwing money at the sky
Evocative, visual poem with a
Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021
Evocative, visual poem with a great last line :)
Read full commentPosted in later
Just a stellar poem - one of
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
Just a stellar poem - one of your very best.
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