The sounds of the city, mixed with my mind, is all I can take some insomniac nights: the quiet yet throbbing hum of street-lights; the steady, lion-...
To the poet's eye, the grass is brilliantly verdant, and the sky is Apollo's chariot strewn race-course. To the poet's eye, a spell of the blues is a...
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A wondrous true literary poem
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2024
First of all, this is excellent literary poetry. You have really taken care with the great questions to a significant degree, with the erudition and semantics and sonic assonance, consonance shape, and more or less pure artistry of literary...
an interesting piece here; a well earned Yellow Cherry
Posted on Thu, 06 Jan 2022
Well; This is a decidedly working-class take. I might appreciate a little more balance; But I still appreciate and approve of this literary micro-satire. The intelligence and decency of the taxi cab driver(from London to Louisiana) is greatly...
I like the exploration of the moon as a regenerative force. I find the moon and the night so, like Louis Armstrong phrases it; It is 'the dark sacred night.'
A wondrous true literary poem
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2024
First of all, this is excellent literary poetry. You have really taken care with the great questions to a significant degree, with the erudition and semantics and sonic assonance, consonance shape, and more or less pure artistry of literary...
Read full commentPosted in In the Silence of my Circuits
superbly composed
Posted on Sat, 11 May 2024
So serenely expressive after a literary fashion; and superbly composed. Thanks for the excellent morning read.
Read full commentPosted in We Are Where We Are, and All is Well
most intriguing
Posted on Sun, 05 Nov 2023
A most intriguing literary trope here. I commend you.
Read full commentPosted in The Fisherwoman and the Sea
an interesting piece here; a well earned Yellow Cherry
Posted on Thu, 06 Jan 2022
Well; This is a decidedly working-class take. I might appreciate a little more balance; But I still appreciate and approve of this literary micro-satire. The intelligence and decency of the taxi cab driver(from London to Louisiana) is greatly...
Read full commentPosted in Ol' Rickety (Part 1)
Neat poem
Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021
a well-earned yellow cherry. I love the optimism and clarity.
Read full commentPosted in In IKEA, he dreams about the woman he loves
Neat poem
Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021
I like the exploration of the moon as a regenerative force. I find the moon and the night so, like Louis Armstrong phrases it; It is 'the dark sacred night.'
Read full commentPosted in Force Of Life
beautiful
Posted on Wed, 31 Aug 2016
What a beautiful(and profound) poem Lily. Thanks for composing
Read full commentPosted in The Grief of Gaziantep.
sublime
Posted on Fri, 24 Apr 2015
sublime, strange, and beautiful
Read full commentPosted in My Other Life is