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StoryTwo kinds of crying : 15th February 2024 Di_Hard407 months 1 week ago
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StoryAdam Hopkins September 1939 - November 2024 Caldwell88 months 2 weeks ago
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My stories

Cherry

The outline

Some dreams never arrive, and yet they leave a trace - the clean-edged hollow of what might have been. We speak of emptiness as if it’s nothing, but...
Cherry

It ain’t where you’re from, it’s where you’re at

We tell ourselves we want change. We stare across the divide at that other life - greener, cleaner, fuller, freer - and we feel the ground beneath us...
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Cherry

Riddles

In 1984, Nick Kershaw’s The Riddle was in the charts - a mysterious, catchy song full of apparently profound but entirely nonsensical lyrics. It...
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Gold cherry

The language of the leaves

In the ruins of our century, the forests began to write again. Their script was neither ink nor binary, but a weaving of signals through sap and...
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Cherry

Barbers protect men’s egos, hairdressers threaten them.

A few months ago, I went to a hairdresser’s and was treated like royalty. Before I’d even sat down, I was offered a drink - coffee, sparkling water,...

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36 of my comments have received 37 Great Feedback votes

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The media thrives on hate. I

Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024

The media thrives on hate. I see more and more people switching off the news, not owning a TV, not buying papers. I got very depressed last year, mostly to do with all the terrors in the Middle East but not limited to just that. I had a friend...

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Posted in I HATE YOU!

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I'm sure if there is a God She or He will understand.

Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024

Surely this God would practise what they preach and offer compassion, and love and turn the other cheek regardless of whatever sins may have been committed. Surely that's the point. No one is born evil and we are all a result of our environment....

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I love me a clootie dumpling.

Posted on Sat, 02 Nov 2024

I love me a clootie dumpling.

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Posted in Breast, not Beast

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Thank you for your high

Posted on Mon, 28 Oct 2024

Thank you for your high praise.

I was actually drawing on Andrew Marvell's style. Crossed with a question from Steven Wright "Ok, so what's the speed of dark?". He has some good leftfield oneliners that leave you thinking such as "Why isn’...

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Posted in The Speed Of Dark // Eclipse

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Woman of the hour

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2024

I watched a 2023 film the other night called Woman of the Hour set in 70s LA. Though it's about a serial killer targeting women, it's actually a study on outdated attitudes towards women in general and unfortunately, there is evidence that these...

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Posted in You picked the wrong time to ask.

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A stark and painful image of

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2024

A stark and painful image of womanhood. You capture the cyclical nature of violence, loss, and survival with visceral language—“hollow-eyed blossoms of rape,” “orphans, widowers,” and the repeated “begetting” convey a history of suffering passed...

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Wonderful. Seamus Heaney's

Posted on Mon, 21 Oct 2024

Wonderful. Seamus Heaney's earthy textures, but sparser and more sensual and questioning. "through truffled scurf" and "saltmist warped the wood" are just fantastic.

There's a songwriter I used to listen to called Joanna Newsom who had a...

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Posted in Figurehead

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Yes, fireworks were a key

Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2024

Yes, fireworks were a key highlight for me too. And running around with sparklers but so scared of that hot metal. I was a '70s kid so a bit later - we had indoor fireworks too as a pre-show before the big ones outside. My dad more than anyone...

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Your poem reminds me of

Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024

Your poem reminds me of something.

There was a German advert featuring a Mr W for a wind energy company called Epuron. I don't know if you've seen it. It's easy to track down on YouTube.

He is large, awkward and looks like a mime...

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Good old Mrs Cooper.

Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024

Good old Mrs Cooper. Entertaining kids without even trying.

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Posted in Tom All Alone (1)

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