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Blog entryStory and Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point Insertponceyfre...11 day 23 hours ago
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StoryThe Bird Feeder Kilb5065 days 2 hours ago
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StoryUncanny Love Tales – (031) The Gardener’s Sister (Part 04) BIGGUS41 week 6 days ago
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StoryCrazy Diamond - the story begins... Jude O'Flynn182 months 2 days ago
StoryLost Dog 5 Kilb5064 months 4 days ago
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StorySpeaking Memories Richard L. Prov...34 months 1 week ago
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Blog entry2020 Cerasus Poetry Olympics Cerasus Poetry24 months 2 weeks ago
StoryLunch Kilb5064 months 3 weeks ago

My stories

The Bird Feeder

A story about Covid, lockdown, and nature. (300 word flash fiction, primarily for younger readers.)
Cherry

Brewster's Way 4

Part 4 of 4
Cherry

Brewster's Way 3

Part 3 of 4
Cherry

Brewster's Way 2

Part 2 of 4
Gold cherry
Story of the week

Brewster's Way 1

Part 1 of 4

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11 of my comments have received 10 Great Feedback votes

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A very well composed poem,

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

A very well composed poem, onemorething. I really like the way the poem gradually shifts its focus from external to internal damage and ends with an overt comparison. Very enjoyable!

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Posted in A Broken Pot’s Lament

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Ewan - this was written as a

Posted on Thu, 04 Oct 2018

Ewan - this was written as a CW prompt many years ago, back in the 80s. Can't do CW prompts to save my life these days!

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Posted in Dust Man

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Pattern-poems can, I think,

Posted on Sun, 06 May 2018

Pattern-poems can, I think, sometimes feel a bit forced in their construction. This poem, Parson, is inspired with its shape complementing and formally adding to - in an exciting way - its subject. And as a footy fan the crowning glory of elderly...

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Posted in Shoot!

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Thanks for your comments

Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018

Thanks for your comments Parson. It's been a long time since I read Carver - too long in fact.

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Posted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 2)

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Thank you insert & eds -

Posted on Sat, 29 Apr 2017

Thank you insert & eds - appreciated!

I'll be reading this poem next week at a spoken word event in Worcester & will definitely spread the Abc word!

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Posted in The Wall

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A very moving poem - each

Posted on Sat, 06 Aug 2016

A very moving poem - each word justified and demanding recognition, nothing wasted, the brevity achieving something of considerable beauty.

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Posted in Whole

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Very well crafted and thought

Posted on Fri, 27 May 2016

Very well crafted and thought provoking. Look forward to reading more of your work.

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Posted in The Kiss

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Really enjoyed this..

Posted on Fri, 04 Mar 2016

Really enjoyed this...especially like the way we are drawn by the first three stanzas...stanzas that reflect and appear as a jagged mirror...the poem opening up like a sluice gate...carrying the reader to a final uncompromising crescendo......

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Posted in Nuthoused

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"a whisper of Angostura

Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015

"a whisper of Angostura bitters...

a tornado of textures, flavours, fandango with my mind...

hues that burn and bleed and bind"

I'm salivating! Great stuff Silver.

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Posted in On Preparing a Fruit Salad

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A mesmerising poem, Silver..

Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2015

A mesmerising poem, Silver...wonderfully fluent in form & intelligence, the image of stretch marks acted as a powerful - and at the same time beautiful - metaphor for artistic and emotional imperfection.

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Posted in The Poetry of Porcelain