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Storyi don't turn up at your house... JupiterMoon37 months 3 weeks ago
Storypassing JupiterMoon48 months 4 days ago
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Story'No, i won't be needing breakfast' JupiterMoon31 year 6 days ago
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Storydoes that phone work with crumpets? JupiterMoon11 year 3 months ago
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Storystars over kennet JupiterMoon61 year 4 months ago
Storyonly when JupiterMoon41 year 4 months ago
Storyhog plum and lobster JupiterMoon31 year 5 months ago
Storyspeed-dating for the vanished JupiterMoon31 year 6 months ago
Storywhat some may call... JupiterMoon81 year 6 months ago
Storyout of the loop JupiterMoon61 year 6 months ago
Storyfar dust JupiterMoon51 year 7 months ago
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My stories

Gold cherry

bmw

bmw the sun casts its shape across your lounge dusty china and faded photographs a radiator key you no longer understand your arrival grander now...
Gold cherry

24-hour crisps cost more than £2

24-hour crisps cost more than £2 each door is different but each reminds me how exhausted i am my bicycle seat is worn but can still bruise – so many...
Gold cherry

i don't turn up at your house...

i don’t turn up at your house… i hear them practiced piety echoing down the lane brief torch light you move as a pack a fala-la makes it through then...
Gold cherry

passing

passing you boarded up the top windows first, on the inside i thought it was a weed grow but val at number 14 whispered behind her hand – he never...
Cherry

close cousin

close cousin monkeys die without touch not just the rough and tumble of a jungle but the comfort of contact of touch made of love they withdraw...

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5 of my comments have received 6 Great Feedback votes

2 Votes

Wow - these seems popular.

Posted on Thu, 13 Nov 2014

Wow - these seems popular. Thank you all for your comments. There is sadness in this poem; sadness in the surrender. But, that's the thing about surrender, you can change it. You can work hard to not wave the white flag. 

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Posted in not quite AA, but only 12 steps to the bar

1 Vote

This is stunning!

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

This is stunning!

Heartfelt and powerful. So many lines I loved - but 'They call me scattered; maybe true, But stars are scattered, brilliant too' is just amazing - it should be spray-painted on billboards and fwnces everywhere! Wonderful...

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Posted in Wired Differently

1 Vote

Wonderful. Simply beautiful,

Posted on Fri, 16 Feb 2024

Wonderful. Simply beautiful, with just enough of a whisper of stark to give it bite. Powerful and well deserved picks. 

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Posted in Our Soil

1 Vote

Thank you for the golden

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

Thank you for the golden cherry and the kind comments everyone!

I would have loved to have joined in with the reading Insert... - but I'm seeing the Steve Hillage Band that night (a very good excuse, surely?) Next time... 

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Posted in meltwater

1 Vote

Love this - perhaps it could

Posted on Sun, 18 Apr 2021

Love this - perhaps it could replace the daily news? Smart, clever and funny. 

'We can meet people (no more than six)
for social intercourse but not dirty tricks'

Glorious Luigi.  

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Posted in After the Storm