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I have 75 stories published in
7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 53729 times
and 91 of my stories have been cherry picked.
228 of my 1,935 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 231 votes
My ghost story 'The Light Left' (under the name Jane Ayrie) can be found in the anthology 'Cold Iron', published by Iron Press:: https://tinyurl.com/yardmpqs
A short piece of science fiction, 'Madness Not To' (under the name Jane Roberts) is on the Terra 2 website here: :https://yorkstjohnterratwo.com/portfolio/madness-not-to-by-jane-roberts/
My ABC blog, including life at Castle Pillock, is here: https://www.abctales.com/blogs/airyfairy There are also some previous Castle Pillock episodes in the named collection below.
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Loved it! Laughed out loud
Posted on Fri, 13 May 2016
Loved it! Laughed out loud at the detectives. Can't wait to see the next lot of trouble!
Read full commentPosted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 14
You tell that Freddy where to
Posted on Tue, 10 May 2016
You tell that Freddy where to go.
I loved the description of your childhood efforts to stay awake, and the skilful way you marry them up with your present situation. I hope you had a great day at the ballpark.
Read full commentPosted in Resistance and Rejuvenation
Lovely to see this back.
Posted on Tue, 10 May 2016
Lovely to see this back. Good set up for this chapter - very interested to see how the resourceful Chantelle resolves her problem!
Read full commentPosted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 13
I really enjoyed this. It's
Posted on Sun, 08 May 2016
I really enjoyed this. It's a cliche to say 'we've all been there', and maybe not exactly in that way, but the emotions are so recognisable, and the remedies, with personal variations, are pretty universal. The bit about social media made me...
Read full commentPosted in Tara
Really interesting, the sick
Posted on Sun, 08 May 2016
Really interesting, the sick but not-feeling-sick perspective. Good to know that your writing is helping you through this. Please keep posting the updates!
Read full commentPosted in Sick and Tired and Strong
The strands all coming
Posted on Mon, 28 Mar 2016
The strands all coming together and it is still well controlled - the reader feels confident that you have command of the plot! (Not always the case with thrillers). Marc has a real depth of character - I like the way you present the loving...
Read full commentPosted in EBOLOWA 34
The opening paragraphs of
Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015
The opening paragraphs of this chapter are absolutely splendid writing. For me, Marc is the most vivid of all the characters. The bit about the hip being a pestle and mortar is particularly striking.
Also another development in this...
Read full commentPosted in EBOLOWA 22
Hi
Posted on Wed, 12 Aug 2015
Hi
I'm rattling through this - enjoying very much. The details you have put in to evoke the period are very effective. I was very struck in a previous chapter how you caught the murk and grime of seventies Britain, and the feel you have...
Read full commentPosted in EBOLOWA 15
One of the things I really
Posted on Wed, 27 Apr 2016
One of the things I really like about this story is the way you anchor it with precise detail and description - lots of day to day stuff that gives the people and the place solidity and believability, so important when your plot centres on the...
Read full commentPosted in Switchback. Ch14 pt2
It is difficult to read,
Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2016
It is difficult to read, particularly on a screen. The words themselves provide the cumulative effect you seem to be aiming for, powerfully building to the denoument. I don't think you need this particular formatting.
Read full commentPosted in WW1 ghosts
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