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Assorted writers' groups, the odd anthology, occasional readings.  Lots of looking out of the window.  Hello, and thanks for dropping by.

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Readings of Episodes One and Two of the Pad Life Journals are now available on Sound Cloud: https://soundcloud.com/user-968566758   More to follow!

 

 

 

 

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Lustrum (IP) (With apologies to Robert Harris)

It is, or should be, a truth universally acknowledged that a world run by David Attenborough and Mary Beard would be a sane and civilised place and a much better bet than we have at the moment

The Net Caster (Part Twenty-Six)

'It's government,' said Madam. 'They choose what they will and won't tell the governed. And in this case, they are completely and utterly right.'
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The Net Caster (Part Twenty-Five)

Even the members of the diaspora cannot agree on the best way to save it.
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The Net Caster (Part Twenty-Four)

I looked at Hamish. Who had replaced the dodgy businessman, the charming, self-serving rogue I had known since childhood, with this stern creature who delivered lectures to the powerful?
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I'll Teach You To Burn (IP)

Fire was a dominant theme in my childhood. It was for most kids in the fifties and sixties. It was one of our earliest lessons on the contrariness of life.
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825 of my comments have received 882 Great Feedback votes

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Pick of the Day

Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022

With brilliant characters and a racking up of tension that makes your skin prickle, this is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please share/retweet if you enjoy it too.

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)

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Pick of the Day

Posted on Mon, 20 Jun 2022

A beautiful and apt poem for the summer solstice. This reminds us both of our connections and what should should be our rights when it comes to the land, and it's our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Please do share/retweet if you enjoy it...

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Poem of the Week

Posted on Mon, 13 Jun 2022

This is our Poem of the Week - congratulations! 

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Posted in (This Life) Part 7: Resilience

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Pick of the Day

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

Another beautifully written chapter of this completely gripping tale - and it's our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please do share/retweet if you enjoy it too.

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This poem makes me feel

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

This poem makes me feel better and calmer just reading it. It's our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please do share/retweet if you enjoy it too.

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Posted in If I can just get through the day

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Lovely detail - what we would

Posted on Fri, 27 May 2022

Lovely detail - what we would now call refugees bundling up their belongings and taking to the roads, some things never change. And the bit where the soldier is having a good feel - really made me shudder. It's great the way you are moving all...

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A great chapter, and a great

Posted on Wed, 25 May 2022

A great chapter, and a great introduction to this character. I wonder if you need the sentence 'And if he were to stand in court...' because you've already made the point so very well already. 

You're so good at the 'breadcrumb trail' -...

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I liked the fact that the

Posted on Tue, 24 May 2022

I liked the fact that the grandmother (apparently?) simply died of natural causes - it gives a reality to the story, in that the seasons of life go on even in times of great change. Elowen's acceptance of the death also gives a really good idea...

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So well put together. I'm

Posted on Tue, 24 May 2022

So well put together. I'm inclined to agree with celtic about the description of Elowen's face,, and the line 'let us move forward without fear...' didn't quite ring natural for me. But this is utterly engrossing! 

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As Di said, this seems a

Posted on Fri, 27 May 2022

As Di said, this seems a rather abrupt way to give you the diagnosis. But maybe it's a safety mechanism for some doctors, in that detachment may seem like the only way of coping with so regularly having to give bad news. 

I'm sorry it wasn...

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