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Exit Stage Left

It flicks flared talons, quick to catch a hold on prey - invades adjacent spaces. Insidious, its digits fan and pierce clean flesh. It thumbs its...
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295 of my comments have received 281 Great Feedback votes

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Hi delapruch.

Posted on Wed, 01 Jan 2014

Hi delapruch.

This shouts with attitude from a 'realist' point of view - opening with an obsevation regarding the obligation for forced fun in celebration of what is unlikely to be any different to the previous situation, the reasoning...

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Posted in same year’s eve

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There is an amazing bright,

Posted on Mon, 30 Dec 2013

There is a bright, wry humour to this, Tina, and much more to it than first meets the eye. It's  cleverly built, with subtle use of rhyme, and her touch of apparent wickedness, for me, makes it fascinatingly enjoyable and sad in equal measure. 

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Posted in Merry Christmas Mrs Lawrence

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This was so lovely. What a

Posted on Sun, 01 Dec 2013

This was so lovely. What a great tribute to your loving mum! My daughter lives in Tennessee - I'll ask her if she knows Sneedville, and tell her about your poem.

Thank you for sharing this,

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Posted in Sneedville, Tennessee

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This tickled me! You've made

Posted on Thu, 28 Nov 2013

This tickled me! You've made a fun piece out of what is a generally annoying subject for me.

Well done!

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Posted in For a Long Time I Went To Bed Early! I.P.

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Interesting, Elsie -  I

Posted on Sun, 06 Oct 2013

Interesting, Elsie -  I enjoyed thinking about this.

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Posted in Knit we Together

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Hi Elsie. 

Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2013

Hi Elsie. 

Whatever happened to French skipping - and so many other outside games? They seem to have vanished.

A great poem this, full of memories and feelings of childhood. Could you have imagined back then, writing a poem like...

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Posted in Primary School Memories

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Brief, to the point and

Posted on Sun, 27 Jan 2013

Brief, to the point and true. BeeRead full comment

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