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Positive Thinking

By Bee on Sun, 05 Jul 2015

Thinking positive
Miscellaneous
Poem
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A.M.

By Bee on Thu, 02 Jul 2015

Unclassified
Poem
Certificate 12
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A Good Heart

By Bee on Wed, 01 Jul 2015

Scan
Autobiography
Poem
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Standing

By Bee on Mon, 29 Jun 2015

Why do flies choose eyes?
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Poem
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Would You...

By Bee on Sun, 28 Jun 2015

Poem for the wind
Love
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295 of my comments have received 281 Great Feedback votes

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It should have got in. Just

Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2014

It should have got in. Just one small point - I believed rhino horn is not bone, but compacted hair. But then I read:

'The rhino's horn has no bone in it at all. The fact that it is made entirely of keratin led scientists to guess that it...

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Posted in Thandi

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There is something delicate

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014

Hi Maisie.

There is something delicate and wistful about this poem that I really liked. I thought the way you switched tenses back and forth made it interesting, too. I found I had to really think about that. 

Liked and enjoyed.

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Posted in the bench

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I think this works so well as

Posted on Thu, 03 Jul 2014

I think this works so well as a short story, but like scratch, I'd love to see it go on. It is hard hitting, but it made me want to cry that anyone could buy - 'if the price is right and they’re in good nick (them - then? ) I'll take...

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Posted in Welcome To England

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I know I shouldn't pick just

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014

 

'ride the splendid spine 
of a thought-train,'
I know I shouldn't pick just this bit out, but I adored it, so I did. If this is you not writing poetry because it's out there to see, Lord help us when you try. 

Beauty...

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Posted in Poetry and That

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Lovely piece of writing. I

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014

Lovely piece of writing. I was quite moved by your thoughts. It made me think of how we have been able to form connections along a more spiritual line with people we've never physically met, but speak to by letters, or more recently, by email. ...

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Posted in Scribbles

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The other half of the story.

Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2014

Morning, Tina.

The other half of the story. Poignant and perfectly worded to draw appropriate sympathy. She's a hero.

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Posted in No Fairy-Tale – This

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Hi Tina. 

Posted on Wed, 04 Jun 2014

Hi Tina. 

This could mean something different to each reader. It meant something to me and I loved it and found it very moving.

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Posted in Phoenix Rising

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Hi Poetica.

Posted on Mon, 02 Jun 2014

Hi Poetica.

I like this poem because although it is an outpouring of emotion, which is a good thing, and something I have often found to be very helpful, you have taken the time and trouble to think carefully about the structure and rhyme...

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Posted in The Colour Brown

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She has a voice! Love it!

Posted on Sat, 31 May 2014

She has a voice!

Love it!

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Posted in Air Kisses

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I love this poem, too. I wish

Posted on Tue, 27 May 2014

I love this poem, too. I wish everyone in the world could read it, especially those who would / should see themselves in it. It should be filmed and shown between adverts on TV. And I'd love this to be the next poem of the week. Really well done...

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Posted in I Wish You'd Dye Your Hair

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