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Positive Thinking
Thinking positive
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Standing
Why do flies choose eyes?
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Would You...
Poem for the wind
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This is fun and educational.
Posted on Sat, 26 Apr 2014
This is fun and educational. Loads of great rhymes add to the fun, and that first verse - I loved that. Brilliant!
Read full commentPosted in A is for Aardvark –
Hi Lindy.
Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014
Hi Lindy.
I like the story, especially the parts where it comes through her own thoughts, and in the brief dialogue. It might just be me but the first half sounds a bit too 'telling', if that makes sense, and I wondered if it could be...
Read full commentPosted in Knit One Slip One Part 2
My dad couldn't do that
Posted on Fri, 28 Mar 2014
My dad couldn't do that either, aside from being somewhat inconsiderate to slugs, he's a softy too. It was pretty heartbreaking at the time. I kind of imagined I could crush up worms for it, but everyone was against any effort to save it. I've...
Read full commentPosted in The Longest Day
I think this is brilliant,
Posted on Mon, 24 Mar 2014
I think this is brilliant, Tina. I love the seemingly glib tone as you summarise life listing the facts with a throwaway casualness that is half bitter, half sweet with a clever wit that softens what is in places, sad but also factual. My...
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There is such anguish in this
Posted on Thu, 20 Mar 2014
There is such anguish in this. So often missed - that last moment, the last chance to be there. But it happens so often that I believe that it's difficult for someone to leave when certain loved ones are present and that they can only let go in...
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I agree with Vera - a poem be
Posted on Fri, 14 Mar 2014
I agree with Vera - a poem be read out loud. Entertainingly and wittily written.
Read full commentPosted in Shorty
I'm so relieved the photo has
Posted on Fri, 07 Mar 2014
I'm so relieved the photo has nothing to do with the poem, Moya. Very expressive of those emotions, wistful and yearning. Lovely words - I could be wrong, but if it was me, I'd lose the commas at the ends of the lines where sentences don't need...
Read full commentPosted in Love?
Hi Steve.
Posted on Sat, 01 Mar 2014
Hi Steve.
When you stop drinking you start thinking - thinking of all the stuff you used to block out and that's painful at times but your writing is a great friend to you here - keep going. Really, keep this up and in a short while you...
Read full commentPosted in being sober 3
Brilliantly written - really
Posted on Thu, 27 Feb 2014
Brilliantly written - really moving. Puts so much into perspective that I am sitting here wondering why I have ever bothered writing most of the stuff I've prattled on about.
Read full commentPosted in Flood
Hi Trish.
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2014
Hi Trish.
What a lovely poem. I noticed a couple of typos - in stanza 1&2 the word 'to' has an exta 'o' - should read 'to'. And at the end of the first stanza, I was wondering if it should be -
That we all woke up...
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