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Did You...

By Bee on Sat, 12 Sep 2015

Did you take my hand and lead us to the edge of water, where our damp companions leapt cavorting on the firm and level sand? Did their sinking feet...

Love

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Songing - (a poem for hudsonmoon)

By Bee on Fri, 11 Sep 2015

For Rich who is so kind.

Autobiography

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Only the Lonely

By Bee on Thu, 10 Sep 2015

Nature

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Margaret

By Bee on Mon, 07 Sep 2015

An unexpected phone call Much to the annoyance of anyone trying to get hold of me by telephone, I've stopped answering these days. It's become a bit...

Autobiography

Story

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295 of my comments have received 281 Great Feedback votes

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Honest and heartbreaking

Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2015

Honest and heartbreaking words, Richard. Mums forgive because they know without tears that they are loved. And they always worry - even when the time for real concern has passed - (this, from experience). From her photo, she looks lovely. Tears...

Posted in Mum, I promise I won't let guilt consume me

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As seen throught the eys of a

Posted on Tue, 24 Mar 2015

As seen throught the eys of a predator - dark, Tina. Sad, because I love little red shoes. Like Jean - I loved the colored leaves.

Posted in Little Red Shiny Shoes

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Seeing through the eyes of an

Posted on Tue, 24 Mar 2015

Seeing through the eyes of an animal. Sad we don't always understand. If you read through again, you will spot some extra words where you probably changed things then forgot to take out the old. Liked this little clip.

Posted in a hell of a ride

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I like the perhaps in this,

Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2015

I like the perhaps in this, the trouble between faith and doubt and the symbolic use of waters, eg. waters of despair, and the storms depicting emotion. Being carried by the tides to a new life on a spark of faith. It's got an almost helpless...

Posted in AT THE SEA

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Perfectly portrayed -

Posted on Sun, 15 Mar 2015

Perfectly portrayed - pressing on with nothing but forced determination and endurance. I felt it all in the no words wasted running flow from start to painful finish. And that she will have to do the whole thing again, is implied in the last,...

Posted in Endurance

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This wonderful snapshot of

Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2015

This wonderful snapshot of the day - children at play, joyfully winning a battle with conkers sets of a stark comparison of what is lost. Quietly moving piece.

Posted in In the Cold, Spring Sunlight...

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This is lovely.

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2015

This is lovely - especially this -

'Unnavigable by any but the salmon,
Obsessing their way upstream to the scene of their birth,
As I do,
Riding the grey stream.

A micro-glance,
Just a small slice of...

Posted in The A1 Crosses the River Swale

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'A cold breeze, comes down

Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2015

'A cold breeze, comes down
from the crack of window
hit on my face
cold winds meets fresh tears
bring me to the reality'

I liked this stanza. Ithink it could be made into a poem by itself.

Posted in Nameless

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Morning Ed.

Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015

Morning Ed.

Feel like I've just watched this on TV, it's so cleanly written and vivid in the mind. Like Vera says, sharply detailed - visually and atmospherically, too. Very much enjoyed reading - (twice).

Posted in Frozen Secrets

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Hi Alina

Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015

This is heartfelt and very moving writing. Writing like this can be a great outlet for our feelings in life's ups and downs, and I hope it helps you as much as it has me at times.

Best wishes,