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Beautiful pictures and an

Posted on Sun, 10 May 2015

Beautiful pictures and an outflowing of love in this. In line 9 - did you mean breathes? And I wonder if the first of the repeated word 'heart' in lines 26 and 28 could be changed, and if it might be better, or not, if you did. Lovely, the stream...

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Love seeps and flows and this

Posted on Sun, 03 May 2015

Love seeps and flows and this is very fluid in its movement. There's something joyful and accepting about it. I really like it.

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Posted in Where wild water flows

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This has a Cider With Rosie

Posted on Sat, 02 May 2015

This has a Cider With Rosie type memory feel about it. Innocence and honesty combined, and the fruit makes it juicy to read with a child's eye view and taste of the occasion. It's special, this one. 

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So pleased you saw all that

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2015

So pleased you saw all that Vera. I hope your Mum's right - although for some reason, reading her motto brought a tear to my eye - a good one. Thank you. 

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Posted in Tree Me

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Guess it's all about just

Posted on Sun, 19 Apr 2015

Guess it's all about just being there. There's something very real, yet intangible about the subject. 

Loved this one, Ed.

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Posted in Pillow Talk

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We don't appreciate what we

Posted on Mon, 20 Apr 2015

We don't appreciate what we've got till it's gone. Though it's written in a light tone, I found this particularly moving. 

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Posted in Black Was Her

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I love the jumpiness of -

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2015

I love the jumpiness of - white bum, fawn gone at the end. Catching a glimpse of something so special makes a treasured memory, especially if you can capture it in such beautify of words, as you have done here, Tina. 

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This seems virtually the same

Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2015

This seems virtually the same as the story form which I was able to read by going through the comments button. The ending is sharp - made me feel as sad as the fact that she had to know so much about the tastes of her regular users. I really felt...

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Posted in Kiss my Ass Sofia: re-posted as a poem

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'She didn't love me as much'

Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2015

'She didn't love me as much' means she did love you. It wasn't good enough though, and not your fault. Maybe not anyone's fault. Your writing shows great understanding and insight that I believe might help others. Admired. 

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Honest and heartbreaking

Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2015

Honest and heartbreaking words, Richard. Mums forgive because they know without tears that they are loved. And they always worry - even when the time for real concern has passed - (this, from experience). From her photo, she looks lovely. Tears...

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Posted in Mum, I promise I won't let guilt consume me

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