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Dear Milly-Mops
You will not hear me howl a raucous cry - as I imagine you within your row - tears welled in your tender blues - babies at your side. But I will beg...
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Pain Behaving Badly
After a bad night...
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The Chemotherapy Red Blues
The stupidest poem ever written!
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Really sad. There's a feeling
Posted on Fri, 02 Jan 2015
Really sad. There's a feeling of regret, too , I think. At least someone cared - then wrote this lovely, atmospheric poem.
Read full commentPosted in Rock Bottom
Such a matter of fact run
Posted on Fri, 19 Dec 2014
Such a matter of fact run through of a life -(so far), without an apparent opinion, leaving the reader to decide how to feel about the events, joyful, sorrowful. Such a mixture, even though one event overpowers the rest. I felt a positive...
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As usual, you've tied this
Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014
As usual, you've tied this all together so brilliantly, Jean. Difficult though it must have been for him to tie all the notes together to make a book, you did it, and did so, fascinatingly. Full of hardship and lack of foresight with regard to...
Read full commentPosted in We Who Survived -18 - Visit to the Sager Sisters part 2, Epilogue
Letting go is the hardest
Posted on Wed, 17 Dec 2014
Letting go is the hardest thing, especially when you were never supposed to. There's so much love in this, Tina. It's heartbreaking. It's something about looking back at the memories - and no one knows back then, what's ahead. As usual, no...
Read full commentPosted in Quarter to January
Something rings so horribly
Posted on Sun, 09 Nov 2014
Something rings so horribly true in the nature of this. It reminded me of loads of stuff it would fit in with. Surreal, horribly fascinating and compelling.
Read full commentPosted in Collecting Samples
Most of all, I really felt
Posted on Fri, 28 Nov 2014
Most of all, I really felt the loneliness in this. No one to confide in, and having been 'groomed' using apparent common interests, the feeling of the greatest betrayal and desertion. There's so much more to the story than is written. Very clever...
Read full commentPosted in Only Silence Speaks the Language of Birds
This was fantastic - made me
Posted on Mon, 17 Nov 2014
This was fantastic - made me laugh as well. Loved the ending. Loved everything.
Read full commentPosted in I Woke up and!!!
This is brilliantly written.
Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014
This is brilliantly written. I really got that feeling of when everything goes unreasurringly fragile about you , and even the ground under your feet doesn't feel solid enough, as if something awful is about to happen. The undulating of...
Read full commentPosted in The Dinner Party
I found this unsettling. It
Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2014
I found this unsettling. It is very well expressed and I agree with scratch, honest style writing. There's a sort of longing, yet at the same time pride that blocks the narrator from allowing himself to be reinstated into the grace of his 'tribe...
Read full commentPosted in Living on the edges
This is beautiful. You took
Posted on Fri, 07 Nov 2014
This is beautiful. You took the reader there.
Read full commentPosted in Train stop
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