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Dear Milly-Mops
You will not hear me howl a raucous cry - as I imagine you within your row - tears welled in your tender blues - babies at your side. But I will beg...
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Pain Behaving Badly
After a bad night...
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The Chemotherapy Red Blues
The stupidest poem ever written!
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I found this unsettling. It
Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2014
I found this unsettling. It is very well expressed and I agree with scratch, honest style writing. There's a sort of longing, yet at the same time pride that blocks the narrator from allowing himself to be reinstated into the grace of his 'tribe...
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This is beautiful. You took
Posted on Fri, 07 Nov 2014
This is beautiful. You took the reader there.
Read full commentPosted in Train stop
I love the way this story
Posted on Fri, 31 Oct 2014
I love the way this story builds, but from her awareness of his screaming that last scene is simply brilliant - the cloth the tomatoes falling, hitting the floor, all that breaking and spilling as blood, and that line - 'the air – full of war,...
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Maybe if we over think things
Posted on Fri, 24 Oct 2014
Maybe if we over think things there will be no answer except that secret signs are what they are - secrets. Paranoid overactive brains are not a relaxing combination, I really enjoyed reading this thought provoking piece and overthinking about it...
Read full commentPosted in On the Pavement
Hi Damian.
Posted on Wed, 22 Oct 2014
Hi Damian.
This is a hard and sad story which is told like a statement of truth. In some places it's not quite clear, but I still get what's going on. Reading this, to me it feels like the bones of, or an outline of something that could be...
Read full commentPosted in When faith is gone (part 1)
What!
Posted on Thu, 16 Oct 2014
What!
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People of either gender get
Posted on Thu, 09 Oct 2014
People of either gender get ridiculed for not leaving, but there are always so many compelling reasons to stay. As you point out - love for partner - so 'understand', can't afford to and don't want to leave the home, and in the case of a man,...
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So pleased you heard it.
Posted on Tue, 07 Oct 2014
So pleased you heard it.
Thanks PT
Read full commentPosted in Bed is a Boat
Beautiful imagery. I felt the
Posted on Wed, 01 Oct 2014
Beautiful imagery. I felt the whole process of aging in everything you so vividly, yet delicately describe.
Read full commentPosted in Aridity's Garden
I find your zeal inspiring,
Posted on Wed, 17 Sep 2014
I find your zeal inspiring, but I am wondering what God said to make you think he wanted you to starve yourself for two days. It seems a little strange to me that you would thank him for the food he provided for you, then not eat it. This is...
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