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Breathed - (poetry monthly)
For Stephen on the day of his funeral, with love and fond memories from me xxx
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Writing It Off
I sometimes wonder what I'm doing writing all this drivel, troubling others with problems that should remain dignified and private. Why bother when...
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The Last Third Thursday
Last one.
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I feel that I remember this
Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015
I feel that I remember this lovely poem - so fragile in the making, like those delicate wings of the butterfly and her memory that means so much.
Read full comment'Forget her?
Simpler, by far, to straighten
a rainbow, bring peace to...
Posted in Sara Orange-Tip Was Here
Hi Tina.
Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015
Hi Tina.
Sometimes I think - thank goodness for poetry, where we can let these thoughts and feelings flood out, when we don't get the opportunity to vent them on those who deserve the worst. And you do it so well - the writing, I mean. He...
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I think the scary thing in
Posted on Tue, 14 Jul 2015
I think the scary thing in this poem is that it's about to happen. Beautifully pictured.
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Oh, so clever! You built the
Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2015
Oh, so clever! You built the narrators character so brilliantly by using contrast to the 'main' character, and the twist coming right at the end - you got me!!!
Great writing.
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This is good, AE. 'no use
Posted on Sun, 12 Jul 2015
This is good, AE. 'no use assigning blame.' - that doesn't seem right as you are assigning blame. If you took that out, I think it would work well. Lots of emotion behind the words.
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Thanks for the lovely photo
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2015
Thanks for the lovely photo of the glass half full.
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I liked this. If it were mine
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2015
I liked this. If it were mine, I'd omit the last line and leave the outcome to the readers imagination. Just a thought. But I thought it was really good.
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I loved reading this. It was
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2015
I loved reading this. It was brought to life by the use of the clock - perfect and easy for anyone who's been on to picture. I got taken on as a present (unwanted because I know I hate being trapped in enclosed spaces). At the end of the queue, I...
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A great picture of how it was
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2015
A great picture of how it was - taking care of reality - seen through the eyes of someone who also hoped for better.
Read full commentPosted in Women of Small Histories
You capture the composite
Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2015
You capture the composite scene so brilliantly here, Luigi, and the viewer's own feelings on interpreting what he sees. Reading it, I had a strong feeling that it would work / read better broken into stanzas. But that's not your style, and who am...
Read full commentPosted in A View from the Top (Poetry Monthly)
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