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So simply and plainly put,

Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2015

So simply and plainly put, Rhiannon. Made me think what it's like to exchange one terror for another with only the chance of it working out for the best. Very real and thought provoking. 

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Posted in People Smugglers

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Lovely, Rhiannon. Filled with

Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015

Lovely, Rhiannon. Filled with hope, faith, love and appreciation. 

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Posted in “The joy of an Indian summer*”

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Clever and fun, with a point

Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2015

Clever and fun, with a point to it. I really liked this word play. 

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Posted in Tell-tale Tit!

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Wonderful!

Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015

Wonderful!

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Posted in For the gap

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Cleverly woven piece,

Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015

Cleverly woven piece, brimming with the sights and scents of the turning season, and a message. 'Resentment rears its ugly head, and yet all things must end to begin again, to everything there is a season...' 

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Posted in It's Four in the Afternoon...

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I like the idea we all have a

Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015

I like the idea we all have a different image of her face, which we do, but having mentioned it, you kind of step outside the poem and it becomes reality. Loved this one, but then I'm always saying that - coz it's true, 

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Posted in Lucy in the Sky

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Like the idea of Ashkenazi

Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015

Like the idea of Ashkenazi playing his socks off. The beauty of the girl is so lovingly and affectionately described, and it's great how she brings the whole thing back down to earth with a bump. But it's a dream that can't be broken with a real...

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Posted in La Fille Mal Gardee

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It's amazing! Enjoyed your

Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015

It's amazing! Enjoyed your poem while I should have been sleeping, I think.

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Posted in Sleep Refreshment

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You have given a voice to

Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015

You have given a voice to great desperation.

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Posted in Sand, Water and Blood

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Subtle is the word - you get

Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015

Subtle is the word - you get her feelings and her loneliness in the situation even before being hit by your own on the subject. The pulling off of the flower heads is such a strong image and statement - unobserved by anyone who could begin to...

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Posted in The One...

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