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Soothing fantasy to dream of
Posted on Sun, 18 Oct 2015
Soothing fantasy to dream of forever - pill free, and pain free at the end of life's long day.
'Let’s go there, right now, down to Oyster Bay
where the sea paints a picture of dawn
with a palette of colours it stole from the...
Posted in Oyster Bay
Does the first line seem a
Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2015
Does the first line seem a bit awkward? I wondered if I slight rearrangement might work a bit smoother -
I've been invited to see pole dancing
and I’m rather keen
The last time I was only ten
And it was on the...Read full comment
Posted in I’VE BEEN INVITED TO GO AND SEE
Cleverly woven piece,
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
Cleverly woven piece, brimming with the sights and scents of the turning season, and a message. 'Resentment rears its ugly head, and yet all things must end to begin again, to everything there is a season...'Read full comment
Posted in It's Four in the Afternoon...
I like the idea we all have a
Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015
I like the idea we all have a different image of her face, which we do, but having mentioned it, you kind of step outside the poem and it becomes reality. Loved this one, but then I'm always saying that - coz it's true,Read full comment
Posted in Lucy in the Sky