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My Friend Dad
Funny things, dads.
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Like There's No Tomorrow (poetry monthly)
mything thilly.
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So simply and plainly put,
Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2015
So simply and plainly put, Rhiannon. Made me think what it's like to exchange one terror for another with only the chance of it working out for the best. Very real and thought provoking.
Read full commentPosted in People Smugglers
Lovely, Rhiannon. Filled with
Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015
Lovely, Rhiannon. Filled with hope, faith, love and appreciation.
Read full commentPosted in “The joy of an Indian summer*”
Clever and fun, with a point
Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2015
Clever and fun, with a point to it. I really liked this word play.
Read full commentPosted in Tell-tale Tit!
Wonderful!
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
Wonderful!
Read full commentPosted in For the gap
Cleverly woven piece,
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
Cleverly woven piece, brimming with the sights and scents of the turning season, and a message. 'Resentment rears its ugly head, and yet all things must end to begin again, to everything there is a season...'
Read full commentPosted in It's Four in the Afternoon...
I like the idea we all have a
Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015
I like the idea we all have a different image of her face, which we do, but having mentioned it, you kind of step outside the poem and it becomes reality. Loved this one, but then I'm always saying that - coz it's true,
Read full commentPosted in Lucy in the Sky
Like the idea of Ashkenazi
Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015
Like the idea of Ashkenazi playing his socks off. The beauty of the girl is so lovingly and affectionately described, and it's great how she brings the whole thing back down to earth with a bump. But it's a dream that can't be broken with a real...
Read full commentPosted in La Fille Mal Gardee
It's amazing! Enjoyed your
Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015
It's amazing! Enjoyed your poem while I should have been sleeping, I think.
Read full commentPosted in Sleep Refreshment
You have given a voice to
Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015
You have given a voice to great desperation.
Read full commentPosted in Sand, Water and Blood
Subtle is the word - you get
Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015
Subtle is the word - you get her feelings and her loneliness in the situation even before being hit by your own on the subject. The pulling off of the flower heads is such a strong image and statement - unobserved by anyone who could begin to...
Read full commentPosted in The One...
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