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I'm guessing by 'aspire to

Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015

I'm guessing by 'aspire to imitate', his kids were doing their best to please the 'you' spoken of by the narrator, but he doesn't appritiate it. Speaks like the narrator is also the son. 

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Posted in Legacy

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This is wonderfully pared

Posted on Tue, 20 Oct 2015

This is wonderfully pared down to the bones, but also retains the delicacy of the broken China, which is the self of the narrator, broken and fixed one too many times. 

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Posted in Porcelain

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Soothing fantasy to dream of

Posted on Sun, 18 Oct 2015

Soothing fantasy to dream of forever - pill free, and pain free at the end of life's long day. 

'Let’s go there, right now, down to Oyster Bay
where the sea paints a picture of dawn
with a palette of colours it stole from the...

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Posted in Oyster Bay

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So simply and plainly put,

Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2015

So simply and plainly put, Rhiannon. Made me think what it's like to exchange one terror for another with only the chance of it working out for the best. Very real and thought provoking. 

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Posted in People Smugglers

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Lovely, Rhiannon. Filled with

Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015

Lovely, Rhiannon. Filled with hope, faith, love and appreciation. 

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Posted in “The joy of an Indian summer*”

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Clever and fun, with a point

Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2015

Clever and fun, with a point to it. I really liked this word play. 

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Posted in Tell-tale Tit!

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Does the first line seem a

Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2015

Does the first line seem a bit awkward? I wondered if I slight rearrangement might work a bit smoother -

 

I've been invited to see pole dancing

and I’m rather keen

The last time I was only ten

And it was on the...

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Posted in I’VE BEEN INVITED TO GO AND SEE

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Wonderful!

Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015

Wonderful!

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Posted in For the gap

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Cleverly woven piece,

Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015

Cleverly woven piece, brimming with the sights and scents of the turning season, and a message. 'Resentment rears its ugly head, and yet all things must end to begin again, to everything there is a season...' 

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Posted in It's Four in the Afternoon...

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I like the idea we all have a

Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015

I like the idea we all have a different image of her face, which we do, but having mentioned it, you kind of step outside the poem and it becomes reality. Loved this one, but then I'm always saying that - coz it's true, 

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Posted in Lucy in the Sky

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