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Song of the Oh So Knowing

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This Too - (poetry monthly)

When raging rivers burst their banks and torrents churn in filthy threats to life and limb, doors are bolted; blocked with sand and by a candle's...

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All at a distance
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295 of my comments have received 281 Great Feedback votes

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Lovely and full of hope. 

Posted on Mon, 14 Dec 2015

Lovely and full of hope. 

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Posted in December

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Wonderfully quick and witty

Posted on Wed, 09 Dec 2015

Wonderfully quick and witty with a stab at the end. Everything in the right order as it should be - wish it could be. It would be great to find a cure for terminal apathy - sometimes I think I've got that... Ah well..., but I don't think you can...

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Posted in This Isn't a Dummy Run...

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Been reading this again - it

Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015

Been reading this again - it's very moving. 

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Posted in Free (Poetry monthly)

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Lovely.

Posted on Mon, 07 Dec 2015

Lovely.

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Posted in Green moon haiku set

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Heartbreaking, yet inspiring,

Posted on Fri, 04 Dec 2015

Heartbreaking, yet inspiring, Tina. Such comfort to be found in being able to make these important plans and to have someone open to share them with. Some comfort in knowing you were that one, though tough at the time. 

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Posted in Preparing to Meet Your Goliath

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I like this Marcia. You could

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015

I like this Marcia. You could just add poetry monthly to the title and look as Rhiannon suggested. It fits. Very skyish and eye darty. 

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Posted in look away ..... .... ... .. . . . . . ."Poetry Monthly"

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Good how you got all those

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015

Good how you got all those titles in.

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Posted in The Eagles And Me

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I liked this story a lot, and

Posted on Wed, 02 Dec 2015

I liked this story a lot, and enjoyed the way it was written, but I thought the end was a little weak. Like, how would they know he'd take them there - he could have gone down any chip shop? Just my thinking. And then again, he mightn't have...

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Posted in You'd Better Watch Out

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This poem starts for me on

Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015

This poem starts for me on line three. A sweet expression of love. 

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Posted in Falling

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Love the continuation of her

Posted on Sun, 29 Nov 2015

Love the continuation of her life. Lovely description with wistful feeling behind it all. 

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Posted in Compassion

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