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Song of the Oh So Knowing

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This Too - (poetry monthly)

When raging rivers burst their banks and torrents churn in filthy threats to life and limb, doors are bolted; blocked with sand and by a candle's...

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313 of my comments have received 300 Great Feedback votes

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Nicely developed, Tina. So

Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2015

Nicely developed, Tina. So often people have an us and them attitude, but it's just us without a roof - for such a multitude of reasons. For me you showed this so well in your poem.   

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Posted in The Guy Pushing Big Issue

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I like the repetitions, but I

Posted on Fri, 25 Dec 2015

I like the repetitions, but I felt that some of the rhymes were a little forced perhaps - for convenience - eg. the 'you know' in 'they're sending men back to the Khyber you know.' And should there be a apostrophe in Jehovah's as in the people...

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Posted in Like a Little Candle

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Lovely and full of hope. 

Posted on Mon, 14 Dec 2015

Lovely and full of hope. 

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Posted in December

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Wonderfully quick and witty

Posted on Wed, 09 Dec 2015

Wonderfully quick and witty with a stab at the end. Everything in the right order as it should be - wish it could be. It would be great to find a cure for terminal apathy - sometimes I think I've got that... Ah well..., but I don't think you can...

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Posted in This Isn't a Dummy Run...

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Been reading this again - it

Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015

Been reading this again - it's very moving. 

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Posted in Free (Poetry monthly)

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Lovely.

Posted on Mon, 07 Dec 2015

Lovely.

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Posted in Green moon haiku set

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Heartbreaking, yet inspiring,

Posted on Fri, 04 Dec 2015

Heartbreaking, yet inspiring, Tina. Such comfort to be found in being able to make these important plans and to have someone open to share them with. Some comfort in knowing you were that one, though tough at the time. 

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Posted in Preparing to Meet Your Goliath

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Good how you got all those

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015

Good how you got all those titles in.

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Posted in The Eagles And Me

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I liked this story a lot, and

Posted on Wed, 02 Dec 2015

I liked this story a lot, and enjoyed the way it was written, but I thought the end was a little weak. Like, how would they know he'd take them there - he could have gone down any chip shop? Just my thinking. And then again, he mightn't have...

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Posted in You'd Better Watch Out

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This poem starts for me on

Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015

This poem starts for me on line three. A sweet expression of love. 

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Posted in Falling

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