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From One Woman to Another
As suggested by insert - a thank you poem for my knitted knockers.
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Knitted Knockers
About kindness about
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Hope
From me to anyone who needs it.
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The Flounderer (the vocal version)
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Beautifully done, Tina. Every
Posted on Sun, 15 Nov 2015
Beautifully done, Tina. Every word just folds into the next. Each rhyme and image fits with the mood and the light and shade. A different take.
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I loved the building sense of
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
I loved the building sense of freedom running away with tthe narrator - the joy of it, and tthe not wanting it at the same time.
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Brilliant! Loved it and
Posted on Tue, 10 Nov 2015
Brilliant! Loved it and laughed.
Read full commentPosted in Dr Procrastination
That's the pits when you get
Posted on Mon, 09 Nov 2015
That's the pits when you get asked your name, especially when you remember the healing of grazed knees.The rhymes and rhythm make this a great one to say aloud, which I did. Works so well.
Read full commentPosted in Kiss and Tell (Poetry Monthly)
I like this. You've put it
Posted on Thu, 05 Nov 2015
I like this. You've put it all into such a tight space. Well done!
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Oh Moya, I needed that. Belly
Posted on Thu, 05 Nov 2015
Oh Moya, I needed that. Belly is aching from laughter. I especially enjoyed the bits about Ophelia; the mild, passing thought they might help her, then back to their own chat without another thought for her. Brilliant play. I'd love to have seen...
Read full commentPosted in Romeo and Juliet Live on a Council Estate in Peckham
I'm a nervous wreck with
Posted on Sat, 31 Oct 2015
I'm a nervous wreck with little kids at the park, but it's fun, too. Lovely description in this - all those gripping fingers and wiggling toes....
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This has an ethereal quality,
Posted on Sat, 31 Oct 2015
This has an ethereal quality, Tina. You almost have to be brave, having come to the borders of sleep, to step over the boundary, knowing the infinite possibilities.
Read full commentPosted in "At the Going Down of the Sun"
Paints a wonderfully rich
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015
Paints a wonderfully rich tapestry - each word flowing one into another like the hills. It's lovely, Rhiannon.
Read full commentPosted in On the Mynd
Heartbreaking - seems
Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2015
Heartbreaking - seems impossible to get through the barriers, but kindness shown is often remembered when occasionally, it wins through. There are survivors, and hope.
Well written, Lindy.
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