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Really tells the story of the day - and scenery. Could you do a recording of this one, Rhiannon? It would work so well with all those rhymes. I'd love to hear you read it.
From the beauty of a single flame to so much destruction where the most destructive of all gets, deservedly, the least mention in this wonderfully descriptive poem. I absolutely loved the opening line, the sounds in the first stanza, and images...
That's the pits when you get asked your name, especially when you remember the healing of grazed knees.The rhymes and rhythm make this a great one to say aloud, which I did. Works so well.
I found this poem to be
Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2015
I found this poem to be thoughtful and interesting.
Read full commentPosted in a piece of art
Really tells the story and
Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2015
Really tells the story of the day - and scenery. Could you do a recording of this one, Rhiannon? It would work so well with all those rhymes. I'd love to hear you read it.
Read full commentPosted in Day of contrasts
From the beauty of a single
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015
From the beauty of a single flame to so much destruction where the most destructive of all gets, deservedly, the least mention in this wonderfully descriptive poem. I absolutely loved the opening line, the sounds in the first stanza, and images...
Read full commentPosted in The Flame (Poetry Monthly)
What a wonderful flow of
Posted on Mon, 23 Nov 2015
What a wonderful flow of sound and rhyme.
Read full commentPosted in The Journey to End all Journeys (Poetry Monthly)
Took my breath away reading.
Posted on Sun, 22 Nov 2015
Took my breath away reading. Something cold in the stark delivery... Described beauty.
Read full commentPosted in Muse
Beautiful and delicately done
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
Beautiful and delicately done.
Read full commentPosted in in seeking
Beautifully done, Tina. Every
Posted on Sun, 15 Nov 2015
Beautifully done, Tina. Every word just folds into the next. Each rhyme and image fits with the mood and the light and shade. A different take.
Read full commentPosted in Tripping the Light Fantastic
I loved the building sense of
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
I loved the building sense of freedom running away with tthe narrator - the joy of it, and tthe not wanting it at the same time.
Read full commentPosted in Joyride
Brilliant! Loved it and
Posted on Tue, 10 Nov 2015
Brilliant! Loved it and laughed.
Read full commentPosted in Dr Procrastination
That's the pits when you get
Posted on Mon, 09 Nov 2015
That's the pits when you get asked your name, especially when you remember the healing of grazed knees.The rhymes and rhythm make this a great one to say aloud, which I did. Works so well.
Read full commentPosted in Kiss and Tell (Poetry Monthly)
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