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287 of my comments have received 273 Great Feedback votes

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'Abortion is a privacy issue.

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2015

'Abortion is a privacy issue. An unwanted baby is like an alien living inside of your body.' 

As an entire piece of writing, I found it somewhat lacking in understanding as it seems to imply that this - 'An unwanted baby is like an alien...

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Posted in Abortion

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It's just perfect.

Posted on Tue, 04 Aug 2015

It's just perfect.

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Posted in Elephant Song

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Heartbreaking last line in an

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2015

Heartbreaking last line in an honest hearted poem, Tina. Some feelings never leave, and guilt has a nasty habit of clinging on the longest, whether right, or wrong.

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Posted in For What it's Worth...

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That dress did me in, Tina.

Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2015

That dress did me in, Tina. And I loved -

'her ancient Aran jumper...
... it might unburden me...at least
be a vehicle for my grief...
 
but when I open the door...see its arms folded 
across its chest in...

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Posted in Clothes-Speak

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Excellent characterization

Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2015

Excellent characterization and a brilliant storyline leading to an unexpected multilayered ending with extended implications.

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Posted in Lisitskiaia's Quarter

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Such an uplifting poem, Tina,

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2015

Such an uplifting poem, Tina, and filled with appreciation of the simple things in life that remind us of so much more.

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Posted in Ten Things I Love...

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I like Erin's introduction

Posted on Thu, 30 Jul 2015

I like Erin's introduction using the cat which opens up the reason for the lonliness. Her personality is there, too, through her would be responses. I liked this.

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Posted in Why I Live Alone

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What an amazing flow of

Posted on Tue, 28 Jul 2015

What an amazing flow of poetry in prose. Excellent! Neatly worked story, too.

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Posted in Mandragora's Curse

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A moment captured in a flash

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2015

A moment captured in a flash of carefully chosen words.

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Posted in Flypast

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It was the day

Posted on Sun, 26 Jul 2015

It was the day
I went down to the kitchen –
the thin skin of the night 
peeling back, '                    

That's exquisitly delicately worded, Tina. And the following words are more heartbreaking for their matter-of-...

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Posted in Chess

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