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Howl Like a Wolf
In the chill hour
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All Who Are About To Die
Mind set
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Subtle is the word - you get
Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015
Subtle is the word - you get her feelings and her loneliness in the situation even before being hit by your own on the subject. The pulling off of the flower heads is such a strong image and statement - unobserved by anyone who could begin to...
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Excellent !!!
Posted on Thu, 03 Sep 2015
Excellent !!!
Read full commentPosted in Repo Part 2 (Jason's last Repos)
I know that feeling of having
Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2015
I know that feeling of having to decide not to get mentally involved. We have enough to worry about without taking on the facts of life in nature.
Enjoyed the poem - very visual.
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'Musical box full of sea
Posted on Sat, 29 Aug 2015
'Musical box full of sea-shells, and ‘if onlys’...' I loved that. And the red coat in a black and white photo. Wistful poem with lovely images.
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Disappointed coz I thought it
Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015
Disappointed coz I thought it was fairies and such, but the poem is lovely. Sharply, simply worded and clever in the way you use what it's not to describe the beauty of scene, and the ultimate point of her leaving.
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The less said, the more you
Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015
The less said, the more you think.
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That does sound rather like a
Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015
That does sound rather like a crush. Nothing wrong with that, and this is a very well written and explored piece. I really enjoyed reading it. But I was left at the end thinking how in time you'll realise you don't need the approval of someone...
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I felt that panic I get in
Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2015
I felt that panic I get in this situation. This would be a great one to read aloud at a reading, Rhiannon. Well worded and such a sharp contrast to your lovely nature walks I so enjoy. But I did enjoy this too. Excellently conveyed.
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Great story Tina. You've
Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2015
Great story Tina. You've explored all the emotions beautifully. Once they'd decided the comparisons of the two life support machines and possibilities of disabilities for either child, the only real question was whether they could cope.
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In the face of impending doom
Posted on Fri, 21 Aug 2015
In the face of impending doom we bury our heads in the sand and worry about trivialities, because we can do nothing about the bigger picure, except feel oddly guilty for self imposed ignorance by necessity. Probably over thinking - but then, I do...
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