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Like the idea of Ashkenazi

Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015

Like the idea of Ashkenazi playing his socks off. The beauty of the girl is so lovingly and affectionately described, and it's great how she brings the whole thing back down to earth with a bump. But it's a dream that can't be broken with a real...

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Posted in La Fille Mal Gardee

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It's amazing! Enjoyed your

Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015

It's amazing! Enjoyed your poem while I should have been sleeping, I think.

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Posted in Sleep Refreshment

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You have given a voice to

Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015

You have given a voice to great desperation.

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Posted in Sand, Water and Blood

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Subtle is the word - you get

Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015

Subtle is the word - you get her feelings and her loneliness in the situation even before being hit by your own on the subject. The pulling off of the flower heads is such a strong image and statement - unobserved by anyone who could begin to...

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Posted in The One...

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Excellent !!!

Posted on Thu, 03 Sep 2015

Excellent !!!

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Posted in Repo Part 2 (Jason's last Repos)

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I know that feeling of having

Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2015

I know that feeling of having to decide not to get mentally involved. We have enough to worry about without taking on the facts of life in nature. 

Enjoyed the poem - very visual.

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Posted in Ruddy Ducks

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'Musical box full of sea

Posted on Sat, 29 Aug 2015

'Musical box full of sea-shells, and ‘if onlys’...' I loved that. And the red coat in a black and white photo. Wistful poem with lovely images.

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Posted in Snap Shot

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Disappointed coz I thought it

Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015

Disappointed coz I thought it was fairies and such, but the poem is lovely. Sharply, simply worded and clever in the way you use what it's not to describe the beauty of scene, and the ultimate point of her leaving.

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Posted in dead skin

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The less said, the more you

Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015

The less said, the more you think.

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Posted in Saturday Night and Sunday Morning

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That does sound rather like a

Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015

That does sound rather like a crush. Nothing wrong with that, and this is a very well written and explored piece. I really enjoyed reading it. But I was left at the end thinking how in time you'll realise you don't need the approval of someone...

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