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Excellent !!!

Posted on Thu, 03 Sep 2015

Excellent !!!

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Posted in Repo Part 2 (Jason's last Repos)

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I know that feeling of having

Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2015

I know that feeling of having to decide not to get mentally involved. We have enough to worry about without taking on the facts of life in nature. 

Enjoyed the poem - very visual.

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Posted in Ruddy Ducks

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'Musical box full of sea

Posted on Sat, 29 Aug 2015

'Musical box full of sea-shells, and ‘if onlys’...' I loved that. And the red coat in a black and white photo. Wistful poem with lovely images.

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Posted in Snap Shot

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Disappointed coz I thought it

Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015

Disappointed coz I thought it was fairies and such, but the poem is lovely. Sharply, simply worded and clever in the way you use what it's not to describe the beauty of scene, and the ultimate point of her leaving.

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Posted in dead skin

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The less said, the more you

Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015

The less said, the more you think.

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Posted in Saturday Night and Sunday Morning

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That does sound rather like a

Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015

That does sound rather like a crush. Nothing wrong with that, and this is a very well written and explored piece. I really enjoyed reading it. But I was left at the end thinking how in time you'll realise you don't need the approval of someone...

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Posted in ___ _____ Was

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I felt that panic I get in

Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2015

I felt that panic I get in this situation. This would be a great one to read aloud at a reading, Rhiannon. Well worded and such a sharp contrast to your lovely nature walks I so enjoy. But I did enjoy this too. Excellently conveyed. 

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Posted in Blue Mood Mall

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Great story Tina. You've

Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2015

Great story Tina. You've explored all the emotions beautifully. Once they'd decided the comparisons of the two life support machines and possibilities of disabilities for either child, the only real question was whether they could cope.

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Posted in The X Factor

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In the face of impending doom

Posted on Fri, 21 Aug 2015

In the face of impending doom we bury our heads in the sand and worry about trivialities, because we can do nothing about the bigger picure, except feel oddly guilty for self imposed ignorance by necessity. Probably over thinking - but then, I do...

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Posted in Sleep Walking

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Delicately done, Tina, and

Posted on Fri, 21 Aug 2015

Delicately done, Tina, and beautiful. Layered with meaning.

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Posted in Blossom Trees

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