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The Flounderer
Was she?
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Like What We Was
From fear...
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I like this. You've put it
Posted on Thu, 05 Nov 2015
I like this. You've put it all into such a tight space. Well done!
Read full commentPosted in Addiction
Oh Moya, I needed that. Belly
Posted on Thu, 05 Nov 2015
Oh Moya, I needed that. Belly is aching from laughter. I especially enjoyed the bits about Ophelia; the mild, passing thought they might help her, then back to their own chat without another thought for her. Brilliant play. I'd love to have seen...
Read full commentPosted in Romeo and Juliet Live on a Council Estate in Peckham
I'm a nervous wreck with
Posted on Sat, 31 Oct 2015
I'm a nervous wreck with little kids at the park, but it's fun, too. Lovely description in this - all those gripping fingers and wiggling toes....
Read full commentPosted in Spreading their Wings!
This has an ethereal quality,
Posted on Sat, 31 Oct 2015
This has an ethereal quality, Tina. You almost have to be brave, having come to the borders of sleep, to step over the boundary, knowing the infinite possibilities.
Read full commentPosted in "At the Going Down of the Sun"
Paints a wonderfully rich
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015
Paints a wonderfully rich tapestry - each word flowing one into another like the hills. It's lovely, Rhiannon.
Read full commentPosted in On the Mynd
Heartbreaking - seems
Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2015
Heartbreaking - seems impossible to get through the barriers, but kindness shown is often remembered when occasionally, it wins through. There are survivors, and hope.
Well written, Lindy.
Read full commentPosted in Hopes and dreams
Are you procrastination? It's
Posted on Fri, 23 Oct 2015
Are you procrastination? It's a really good poem, by the way.
or are you just waiting for someone to tell you who you are coz you don't know yet?
Read full commentPosted in Who am I?
I'm guessing by 'aspire to
Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015
I'm guessing by 'aspire to imitate', his kids were doing their best to please the 'you' spoken of by the narrator, but he doesn't appritiate it. Speaks like the narrator is also the son.
Read full commentPosted in Legacy
This is wonderfully pared
Posted on Tue, 20 Oct 2015
This is wonderfully pared down to the bones, but also retains the delicacy of the broken China, which is the self of the narrator, broken and fixed one too many times.
Read full commentPosted in Porcelain
Soothing fantasy to dream of
Posted on Sun, 18 Oct 2015
Soothing fantasy to dream of forever - pill free, and pain free at the end of life's long day.
'Let’s go there, right now, down to Oyster Bay
Read full commentwhere the sea paints a picture of dawn
with a palette of colours it stole from the...
Posted in Oyster Bay
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