Razed

Cherry

By Bee

Sat, 23 Jan 2016
  • 3447 reads
12 comments
 

the gouged out

rock from lands rescaled 

scapes

scraped caves excavated

graves 

marked twice beyond the pale

beyond

twin hillocks razed to ground

Death v Violence

Silent procession

in progression -

the blackest darkness 

multiplied. Morphing 

into white

 

Certificate 15
Poem
Unclassified

Comments

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

So much depth in these solemn words.

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you Philip.

Bee

Submitted by Ed Crane on

or stream of consciousness. I like the stuccato way it reads. Nice abstract piece.

Edx

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Ed. It's about my op. 

xx

Bee

Submitted by Ed Crane on

 

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Ed.

xx

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you for the cherries.

Bee

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Bee, should this one go in the Journey section?

 

Submitted by Bee on

Yes, sorry, I forgot. 

Thank you. 

Bee

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Picture Credit: http://tinyurl.com/goobek8

 

Submitted by celticman on

scaped and scraped. Just about sums it up. 

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks CM. 

Bee