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Don't Think I Do (poetry monthly)

Love is... but this isn't.
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Cherry

Flanked

Day surgery...
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Cherry

Buzzed Off

https://youtu.be/8CaY97M_gp8 Our hair means a lot to us girls, whether we style, colour, or just pin it up out of the way, it is an expression of our...
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295 of my comments have received 281 Great Feedback votes

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Not sure I completely agree

Posted on Sun, 17 Jan 2016

Not sure I completely agree with the last line, but I thought the rest was really fitting, and I liked the voice. 

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Posted in Plural is Singular

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Unless others depend on you. 

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2016

Unless others depend on you. 

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Posted in don't worry

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This seems a lot about

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2016

This seems a lot about acceptance - the hardest thing to acheive. compassionately written.  Keep recalling and writing, Tina, and don't worry too much about keeping sane - it's not all it's cracked up to be - apparently... Not that I'd know. 

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Posted in Days Like These

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Hi Vesper.

Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2016

Hi Vesper.

 You have this as a poem, but for me it reads better as prose. A few typos to look out for... 

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Posted in Coffee and Croissants

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Well in that case, I don't

Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2016

Well in that case, I don't think you should cut down on drinking, you just need to write more. 

Very much enjoyed reading this.

Cheers Rich x

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Posted in Belly Up

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What a wonderfully told story

Posted on Tue, 05 Jan 2016

What a wonderfully told story. You are an artist with your word painting  Tina. I found this a very moving story. 

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Posted in To Glimpse a Butterfly

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Your story is amazing because

Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016

Your story is amazing because each and every line encapsulates so much information - very originall, and almost feels like a poem - emotion included. Best thing I've read in yonks.    

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Posted in Rebecca

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Filled me with memories I

Posted on Thu, 31 Dec 2015

Filled me with memories I never had - the things actually done in songs we sing about them. Lovely! 

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Posted in Of a New Year's Eve

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Nicely developed, Tina. So

Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2015

Nicely developed, Tina. So often people have an us and them attitude, but it's just us without a roof - for such a multitude of reasons. For me you showed this so well in your poem.   

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Posted in The Guy Pushing Big Issue

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I like the repetitions, but I

Posted on Fri, 25 Dec 2015

I like the repetitions, but I felt that some of the rhymes were a little forced perhaps - for convenience - eg. the 'you know' in 'they're sending men back to the Khyber you know.' And should there be a apostrophe in Jehovah's as in the people...

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Posted in Like a Little Candle

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