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The Cure

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Breech of the Piss

I had a baby today. Not yet - I was probably still in the bath with the big mirror at the side that turned me into a badly plucked chicken. No sign...
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My Daughter

She's lovely!
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Phantommams

Phenomenally woman

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313 of my comments have received 300 Great Feedback votes

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So sad, this. You really got

Posted on Mon, 09 Dec 2013

So sad, this. You really got the emotions across. Character well portrayed and her possible feelings explored..

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Posted in Havisham

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Yes, fits so well. And

Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2016

Yes, fits so well. And triumphant. 

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Posted in Certain Hope Reliable

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If only we could know that a

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2016

If only we could know that a tree could still be there all those years later, but we just don't appreciate it at the time of youth. Lovely poem and thought provoking. 

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Posted in The Art of Art

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So true, Ice.

Posted on Thu, 17 Mar 2016

So true, Ice.

Wishing you all the strength in the world. 

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Posted in Radiation

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I love your fighting spirit,

Posted on Thu, 17 Mar 2016

I love your fighting spirit, Ice. Plus you write good, and that's why I'm following you.

Best wishes,

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Posted in Radiation

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I guess he grew up to be an

Posted on Mon, 14 Mar 2016

I guess he grew up to be an adult version of the narrator - someone with great insight to the workings of a child's mind - the girl's and his own. I thought this was a good, non-judgmental sketch, and was thrilled to see  it get picked.   

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Posted in The Sledge

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maybe not a phychopath, but

Posted on Mon, 14 Mar 2016

maybe not a phychopath, but just couldn't take any more. Loved his imagination when he heard the result of his sabotage, and his Mum had tea... Loved him running home with his tea tray under his arm. Loved his song. Great poem.

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Posted in The Sledge

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There's something in this

Posted on Sat, 12 Mar 2016

There's something in this that shows a certain lack of regret - almost wishing for some. 'try to wish I'd loved you...' The regret, if any, that being too young, you missed something that looking back now seems like a good idea. 

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Posted in Passing Time

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The image of the fishes of

Posted on Thu, 10 Mar 2016

The image of the fishes of fingers being washed in a bowl got me as much as the wonderful assonance. Yes, turn that bed to face the garden so the now can be fully appreciated. Lovely poem, Tina. Positive, yet empathetic and  sad. 

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Posted in 'All That Jazz'

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I feel the title refers to

Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2016

I feel the title refers to the world. Some unusual and original images. Loved, especially, the left-handed humming bird. It's a mixture of fools and frightened rabbits belief in mythology and religion, not shared by the narrator. 

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Posted in Pacha

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