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For my sweet little bird, Custard RiP
Cherry

First Tattoo and First Attempt at Shoplifting

The today in my story was yesterday, cos that's when I wrote it. And my thanks for reading. Bee x
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The Last Song Sung

For 'Custard' - who I hand reared from a new hatched chick eighteen years ago. She's not been well the past few days - here's hoping she'll soon get well.
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313 of my comments have received 300 Great Feedback votes

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Nice twist and all that back

Posted on Tue, 01 Mar 2016

Nice twist at the end, and all that back-finger stabbing - very amusing to watch in the minds eye - for me, not him, obviously, (any of hims). Ass upwards - I love that saying. My friend's Mum was fond of saying something was done 'arse backwards...

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Posted in "Yours Truly"

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'rain is coming down in

Posted on Fri, 26 Feb 2016

'rain is coming down in elevators,' I like that, and the chicken Licken fear factor is well drawn. But I think you'll find the sky is falling down on our heads. Wish it was an acorn... Or is it?...

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Posted in The Song Remains the Same

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So much locked away in this -

Posted on Thu, 25 Feb 2016

So much locked away in this - full of hope, and I loved 'stalwart trees'. Beautiful poem. 

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Posted in Frozen Ground

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Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016

yes

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Posted in Taking is Giving

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I was always accused of being

Posted on Fri, 19 Feb 2016

I was always accused of being antisocial as a child, and until I left home - always in my room, reading, or playing my guitar, while everyone downstairs squabbled whilst watching tv. But as you say, they slept at night. 

I love the way...

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Posted in When in Rome – get used to it

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The images are so clear and

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016

The images are so clear and femininely demonic, full of hidden threat and self accusation, like he'd be a better person if he didn't harbour such a devious mistress. But that she's there for him in all those quaintly infuriating poses and guises...

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Posted in Doubt is my mistress

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Sometimes the burdens weigh

Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016

Sometimes the burdens weigh too heavy and we are forced to allow others to not only lift our load, but provide needed and appropriate care. It takes humility to let go of responsiblity sometimes, but how wonderful the sudden release of freedom,...

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Posted in Restrictions lifted (Poetry Monthly)

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I got how the regret is there

Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016

I got how the regret is there, but mostly cast aside in favour of reality. It made me cry reading. I guess so many of us have a story close to this one, and that's why the poem is so easy to relate to and make fit in with our own easily...

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Posted in Anniversary

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Three nicely put together

Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016

Three nicely put together senryu, conjuring great images. 

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Posted in Black Saturn Haiku Set

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I don't know what else to say

Posted on Wed, 17 Feb 2016

I don't know what else to say, but yes, how lovely! Has she read it?

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Posted in Romance Lives in Dreamland

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