Thought Of The Day :))))))

By prettyrose

Thu, 20 Feb 2014
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If there were no rain to

spoil a glorious morning

That we all wake up and

Hope for.

 

There may be no sunshine

For us all to appreciate

And enjoy when it finally

Graces our doors!!

 

So when the rain keeps

Pouring all over our bright

Happy days.

 

Stay positive and patient for

Those Dry,sunny days,

That will make us smile on,

And on.

 

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Submitted by Bee on

Hi Trish. 

What a lovely poem. I noticed a couple of typos - in stanza 1&2 the word 'to' has an exta 'o'  - should read 'to'. And at the end of the first stanza, I was wondering if it should be - 

 

That we all woke up and 

(Hoped) for., 

 

or 

That we all (wake) up and 

hope for. 

This poem brightened my day. It brought positive vibes and made me smile.

Thank you.

 

Bee

Submitted by prettyrose on

Hi Bee, thanks for the yesup,not even working on the laptop seems to fend off the old bone trouble these days lol. I have corrected. Thank you for commenting and helping, its always appreciated.

And it's lovely to read you liked itsmiley. I hope your well.

 

 

Take care

 

Trish xx

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