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I have 451 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1537439 times and 589 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Happy Mother's Day

Mother of dragons The cat’s mother The martyr who reminds Us how it was so much harder The numb mother numbering The days from when it started And...
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Strange Beings in Strange Times

Something changed. People crawled out from under rocks, Wiped the moss from their heads And headed out alone or in choleric pairs, To where they...
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Imagine if we Didn't Feel Pain

Imagine if we felt no pain No stinging thorn to dock us To the margins of our term Or cuspate pin to hold us Down upon this sober ground We’d be...
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Ode to Compost

On black frosty nights, hands clutch eggshells: On precarious paths, clear goop strings do drip, Down wrists withheld slimed bags of precious peel...
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I Saw You

I saw you And the years had washed you pale A stranger standing Staring at the layered air Nothing in your eyes But spirits still confide Stirring...

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624 of my comments have received 680 Great Feedback votes

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It's a fail of a tale we

Posted on Sun, 17 Mar 2019

It's a fail of a tale we teach our kids. Bad deeds will be punished, if not in life then in hell, look around it's easy to tell, the few reap what the many broke their backs to sow with next to nothing there to show.

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Posted in The Three Fields of You

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Thank you, it is shocking but

Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019

Thank you, it is shocking but having a site like this to go and writing friends is a great comfort

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Posted in Last Week I Lost My Job (Rimus Dissolutas)

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Wow, I like the way you have

Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019

Wow, I like the way you have described your human situation in horticultural terms. Move any established plant and for a good while it will be vulnerable in soil untrue.

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Posted in Roots

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This is a lovely snapshot in

Posted on Fri, 08 Mar 2019

This is a lovely snapshot in time Rhiannon. I feel like people stretched their imaginations a little more back then and then was less shame in choosing something a bit different and making use of what you had. 

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Posted in Gladys Aylward and Tenzing

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Yes she did @Di_Hard and Rod

Posted on Sat, 02 Mar 2019

Yes she did @Di_Hard and Rod and Karen didn't know how to react because that's not their currency.

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Posted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 6) (3)

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This is beautiful Jenny.

Posted on Sun, 03 Mar 2019

This is beautiful Jenny. There is a sense of nature being effortless yet it always trumps human creations. I love the idea of it all being at your back door, I'm the same, I really appreciate my little garden and as one thing fades there is...

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Posted in Precious Nature

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I love it too, it's

Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2019

I love it too, it's unconfined, perhaps you are a bird after all.

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Posted in Conversation of a Tree

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A storm, however brief does

Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019

A storm, however brief does seem to bring with it a change of behaviour in our wildlife as well as the palpable change in atmosphere. This is a lovely tribute. I really enjoyed 'globules released from dark sky splashing.' We missed most of the...

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Posted in Embracing The Storm

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I too love the arrangement

Posted on Tue, 12 Feb 2019

I too love the arrangement Rhiannon, it really works and of course the theme is perfect for February, the soil warming and those seeds about to burst unseen with so much in store.

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Posted in Seasons Connect

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'Somewhere like yesterday'

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

'Somewhere like yesterday' sad truth in these words and it's a beautiful poem too. Thanks for linking it to mine. I also love to see work inspired by other writers on here as I'm so often inspired myself.

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Posted in driverless

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