7 of my comments have received 9 Great Feedback votes
God bless, Bee. I don't know
Posted on Mon, 25 Apr 2016
God bless, Bee. I don't know too much about life, I have not lived long. But I do know that sometimes we meet people along the way who brighten the journey,even if we have no idea who they are.
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Posted in Bee's Journey - (the last leg)
This is a wondeful poem.
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2014
This is a wondeful poem. Despite the increased risks of falling into the much despised trap of cliche, you hold your own against the words (if that even makes sense, since you're kind of on the same side lol!) and that's what makes this piece...Read full comment
Posted in Flood
Such a powerful piece of art.
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2016
Such a powerful piece of art. You've essentially taken apart and beautifed each component of writing in such a rich way. This was truly a pleasure to read.
Just a thought—did you mean to use both 'ambiguous' and 'unambiguous'? Maybe if...Read full comment
Posted in Grave news
I didn't think this was awful
Posted on Tue, 26 Jan 2016
I didn't think this was awful at all! On the contrary, it made me feel that little thrill of envy that I feel every so often while reading other people's poetry:)
"You matter, and we matter". I really liked this. It really pitches that...Read full comment
Posted in Paean
Wow this is so bloody good!!
Posted on Tue, 11 Mar 2014
Wow this is so bloody good!! I have nothing left to say. I mean, I was thinking all this stuff while I was reading it but um...now all I can think is AMAZING.
This story has so many things going on! And yet his story is told with the...Read full comment
Posted in Chestnut Mare